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FireRed hack: [HotW #58] Pokémon Torzach: The Legend Begins (We're back in action, people!)

Shall we show you the Super Powerful Legendary?


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Logan

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    Actually I think the base of it may of been Shinx. It is an okay sprite but not brilliant. Sirgit really needs a fourth leg xD
     

    minchan

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    Actually I think the base of it may of been Shinx. It is an okay sprite but not brilliant. Sirgit really needs a fourth leg xD

    now that you mention it, it DOES kinda look shinx-ish. lol
    i definitely say - if anything - give it another leg. XD
     

    Westrmistr

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    Actually I think the base of it may of been Shinx. It is an okay sprite but not brilliant. Sirgit really needs a fourth leg xD

    Okay!! I'll give it the missing leg... And I'll get to Shinx...

    now that you mention it, it DOES kinda look shinx-ish. lol
    i definitely say - if anything - give it another leg. XD

    Well, I made the sprite from scratch, using my imagination, and looking at the concept art for a little reference. But the concept art is loosely based on Shinx from what I've seen. When I saw the concept art the first time I said "That's Shinx's head..." But it doesn't matter.

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    [HotW #58] Pokémon Torzach: The Legend Begins (We're back in action, people!)


    Okay, how does he look with all four legs?
     
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    The extra leg kind merges with the other two and they all look like they are on the same side...

    Try moving the left of the three feet forward a bit to distinguish the difference, that might help I think. (Forward as in move the foot forward so the leg is more angled... not the whole leg just to clarify :D)
     

    Westrmistr

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    The extra leg kind merges with the other two and they all look like they are on the same side...

    Try moving the left of the three feet forward a bit to distinguish the difference, that might help I think. (Forward as in move the foot forward so the leg is more angled... not the whole leg just to clarify :D)

    Okay...

    [HotW #58] Pokémon Torzach: The Legend Begins (We're back in action, people!)


    How about now?
     
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    i think the whole front leg sticking out is what is weirding my out

    just make all four legs on the ground
     

    Westrmistr

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    i think the whole front leg sticking out is what is weirding my out

    just make all four legs on the ground

    Aw, but I was going for originality! If I do that, it will look just like the concept art! I can fix up the leg, if you want. And if it still doesn't look good, I guess I'll put that leg down...

    How does that sound?
     

    Vanitas~

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    I happen to like it. I just think that back right leg needs to be moved back a bit. You could maybe even put the front right leg down and straighten the front left leg out some so you can see all four legs. Or, instead of straightening it, you could bend it at the knee.
     
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    What is this? A hack involving fakemon that are actually sprites and not crappy drawings? HUZZAH!
    I think I might just add a support banner thing to my sig, simply because of the very well done sprites! Although...Ponleaf...oh well, it still looks awesome :D
     

    Westrmistr

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    *le gasp*
    What is this? A hack involving fakemon that are actually sprites and not crappy drawings? HUZZAH!
    I think I might just add a support banner thing to my sig, simply because of the very well done sprites! Although...Ponleaf...oh well, it still looks awesome :D

    Well, I'm glad you like the sprites! These are fun to make. And Ponleaf, well, Mac, the guy in charge, seems to like it. So it doesn't matter... I think I know what you're getting at though.

    And now! What you've all been waiting for! (Not really!) Another Sirgit sprite! (AAAAAHHHH!)

    [HotW #58] Pokémon Torzach: The Legend Begins (We're back in action, people!)


    I'm not a big fan of this one. It was a quick edit, so I can change a little. But I like the last one better. But, what do you guys think?
     

    Vanitas~

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    [HotW #58] Pokémon Torzach: The Legend Begins (We're back in action, people!)


    I'm not a big fan of this one. It was a quick edit, so I can change a little. But I like the last one better. But, what do you guys think?


    I, too, preferes the previous sprite. It had life to it. Plus, this one's fore-right leg looks like it is just patched on to the main sprite. I say use the old one too.
     

    Vannah☆

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    Well, I'm glad you like the sprites! These are fun to make. And Ponleaf, well, Mac, the guy in charge, seems to like it. So it doesn't matter... I think I know what you're getting at though.

    And now! What you've all been waiting for! (Not really!) Another Sirgit sprite! (AAAAAHHHH!)

    [HotW #58] Pokémon Torzach: The Legend Begins (We're back in action, people!)


    I'm not a big fan of this one. It was a quick edit, so I can change a little. But I like the last one better. But, what do you guys think?

    I edited a few things that were bugging me a bit.
    [HotW #58] Pokémon Torzach: The Legend Begins (We're back in action, people!)
    I have a lil time today + Im on my graphics computer. =3
     

    Vanitas~

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    I edited a few things that were bugging me a bit.
    [HotW #58] Pokémon Torzach: The Legend Begins (We're back in action, people!)

    Aah! I like this one a lot better (no offense West, cause your's is great too!) because the head facing toward the player makes the back leg look good for its positioning plus the front paw makes it adorable!
     

    Westrmistr

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    I edited a few things that were bugging me a bit.
    [HotW #58] Pokémon Torzach: The Legend Begins (We're back in action, people!)
    I have a lil time today + Im on my graphics computer. =3

    I'm sorry, but that looks strange... And you just changed where the light shines on the eyes. I could simply do that too. And you took away its emotion. Where's its happy smile?
     
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    Vannah☆

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    I'm sorry, but that looks strange... And you just changed where the light shines on the eyes. I could simply do that too. And you took away its emotion. Where's its happy smile?

    Yours also had no smile, I'd like to point out. o-o And I dunno, some fakemon give me a smiling vibe. Others don't. I changed three of the paws, some of the shading, added two colors, took away one, changed the nose, mouth, ear ends, and some of the face shape. Oh and the tuffs on the cheeks. This thing really reminds me of espeon. <3

    Changed it up again. With a smile. =3
    [HotW #58] Pokémon Torzach: The Legend Begins (We're back in action, people!)



    EDIT: OMG Just noticed! Got past my 100th post!!! ^_^
     
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    Glad the project is moving and gladly supporting it ^-^ Vannah your spriting's awesome, hope you don't quit the great work! :D
     

    minchan

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    Yours also had no smile, I'd like to point out. o-o And I dunno, some fakemon give me a smiling vibe. Others don't. I changed three of the paws, some of the shading, added two colors, took away one, changed the nose, mouth, ear ends, and some of the face shape. Oh and the tuffs on the cheeks. This thing really reminds me of espeon. <3

    Changed it up again. With a smile. =3
    [HotW #58] Pokémon Torzach: The Legend Begins (We're back in action, people!)



    EDIT: OMG Just noticed! Got past my 100th post!!! ^_^


    I like this version. ^^ it's cute~
    'n gratz on the post count. lol ^^
     

    Vannah☆

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    I like this version. ^^ it's cute~
    'n gratz on the post count. lol ^^

    Many thanks. ^_^; Here's a backsprite.
    [HotW #58] Pokémon Torzach: The Legend Begins (We're back in action, people!)
    Any good? Do you guys think it needs some more black outlining on the ear ends and around the neck to emphasize the sphere tuffs on the neck?


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    Here's a something.
    [HotW #58] Pokémon Torzach: The Legend Begins (We're back in action, people!)
     
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    minchan

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    Many thanks. ^_^; Here's a backsprite.
    [HotW #58] Pokémon Torzach: The Legend Begins (We're back in action, people!)
    Any good? Do you guys think it needs some more black outlining on the ear ends and around the neck to emphasize the sphere tuffs on the neck?


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    Here's a something.
    [HotW #58] Pokémon Torzach: The Legend Begins (We're back in action, people!)


    now i'm no expert but i think there should be a little more black outline on the right ear... tell me if i'm totally off on that statement. lol

    and that... a... something? and what exactly is a 'something'? lol
    kinda cute tho. LOL
     

    Vannah☆

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    now i'm no expert but i think there should be a little more black outline on the right ear... tell me if i'm totally off on that statement. lol

    and that... a... something? and what exactly is a 'something'? lol
    kinda cute tho. LOL

    069 Lumphyri. xD And Ill edit the post later with the edited back.
     
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