Dots's Sprite Showcase! ^^

[Dots]

Very cool! you are good at sprites! are you making a full fakedex? if you are, that would be sweet!

Yep, I am. ^^ Thanks for the compliment.

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Although a small one, I happen to have an Update!

This time it's the Romance Incense, which I've spent a while working on to get the shape right yesterday. This incense is the only discovered method of inducing Luvdisc's eggs into hatching into Luvid, it's infantile stage.
The incense sports a candy pink color and a heart-shaped opening in the front, which reveals its light brown interior and may be used to place an item of choice (usually a small candle or the incense stick itself).

(the Romance Incense)​

That the update for now, and I'd really like to receive feedback, especially tips on how to make the opening look like one. So, since I've got nothing more to state, I'll be adding this to the first post. ^^

 

[deva]

Nice sprite work, keep it up

 

[Star-Shower]

Loving the work as always Dots :D
For the baby version of Smeargle (the 1 before Scrabbit)you caled call it Scribbly, which comes from Scribble

 

[Dots]

Nice sprite work, keep it up

Thank you! I'm giving spriting my all, so it seems that I'm improving. ^^

Loving the work as always Dots :D
For the baby version of Smeargle (the 1 before Scrabbit)you caled call it Scribbly, which comes from Scribble

I like it, but there's a drawback to it.

Smeargle's name origin comes from the words Smear and Beagle; similarly, Scrabbit's name comes from the words Scribble and Rabbit. This makes Scribbly, or any other variations of the name, fitting only for Scrabbit, and not Smeargle. Get what I mean? It's not that I don't like it or anything, in fact, I actually do like it, but it just doesn't fit the current case.

Thanks for the suggestion, and I'd like to hear more from you, so don't hesitate to post any other notions you may have. ^^

Anyways, it seems like Mr. Baby here is cursed to not find a suitable name. Any help from you guys would really really really be appreciated on this topic.

 

[Star-Shower]

I thought of anohter name !!!
Pawstel- made from Paw and Pastel

 

[PokemonSkySD]

hey, really like the sprites.

Your Smeargle alt evo is really good.
Also Luvid is a well designed sprite.

Heres are a few ideas for the Smeargle prevo name, Inku, Acriby, Skechi.
Inku - Ink
Acriby - Acrylics
Sketchi - Sketching.

 

[Colbex]

Hmm, so I was thinking about that prevo again... and what about...
*dramatic pause*
Tulkid. o.o (as in tool kit/kid obviously)
Also because it's known for making supplies (which can be tools) Idk... its late and I think it sounds cute... >_>;

 

[Dots]

I thought of anohter name !!!
Pawstel- made from Paw and Pastel

hey, really like the sprites.

Your Smeargle alt evo is really good.
Also Luvid is a well designed sprite.

Heres are a few ideas for the Smeargle prevo name, Inku, Acriby, Skechi.
Inku - Ink
Acriby - Acrylics
Sketchi - Sketching.

Hmm, so I was thinking about that prevo again... and what about...
*dramatic pause*
Tulkid. o.o (as in tool kit/kid obviously)
Also because it's known for making supplies (which can be tools) Idk... its late and I think it sounds cute... >_>;

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Since I finally received some really well-picked suggestions, I'll be commenting each and every one of them before announcing which one will be official. ^^

Star-Shower's Suggestion(s):

~ Pawstel -

I like how you played on the words in such a cute manner, and it sounds so colorful and soft. The only problem I have with it is that it's a little long and doesn't flow well when you say it out loud. -.-

PokemonSkySD's Suggestion(s):

~ Inku -

It sounds so small and fit for a baby pokemon. It also seems to go well with the evolutions' names, so I have to say that I like this one. ^^

~ Acriby -

Acrylics sounds so sweet and unprofessional the way you played on the word. It also has the word 'crib' fitted into it, which sounds appropriate for a baby pokemon. ^^

~ Sketchi -

Personally I like how you played on the word, and I love how it seems so fitting, but the problem is it sounds too hard for a baby pokemon. That and the fact that it doesn't sound so pokemon-ish. -.-

Colbex's Suggestion(s):

~ Tulkid -

Cute! I like how you used the provided description to come up with the name. There's one problem though, 'tool kit/kid' usually refers to mechanical tools rather than artistic ones, which seems to be more of a 'heavy' reference for a baby pokemon's name. -.-'

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So the winning name is . . .

. . . Without further ado . . . Inku!

(Inku, the Ambitious Pokémon)​

And the reason I've chosen this name is because it's simple and sweet. Also, it has the most connection with the evolutionary line, since Smeargle and Scrabbit both paint using inks given out by their bodies. With the formerly unnamed baby's case, the fact that he doesn't have the ability to excrete any color fluids causes him/her to resort to making those supplies - in other words, they make their own paints by whatever means possible, before rushing off to paint on any available surface. ^^

As promised, winner gets a custom sprite done, so congratulations PokemonSkySD! You can send me a request (as a PM) for one sprite whenever you wish to do so, and I promise I'll do my best to match it with the reference image. ^^
For all other people who suggested names, I deeply thank you for your efforts. I know it can't be helped but feeling a little disappointed. However, there is surely going to be more unnamed pokemon in the future, so no worries, you'll probably be getting the chance then. ^^

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On further note, next in line to be sprited is either Cloble (the second evolution for my grass starter) or Merby (the water starter).

 

[Star-Shower]

I like that name to it's original :). I can't wait to see some more sprites. If you haven't got an idea for a fire starter how about mole or squirrel or dog. If you need any ideas or advice on anything Dots feel free to PM me as I have said before or contact me on Planetdev as i'm on there most of the time. Dots NO.1 FAN!!!!!

 

[PokemonSkySD]

thanks for the offer dot, i'll think about what it'll be.
And Inku and Scrabbit are my two favs out of yours so far, keep it up. ;)

 

[Dots]

I like that name to it's original :). I can't wait to see some more sprites. If you haven't got an idea for a fire starter how about mole or squirrel or dog. If you need any ideas or advice on anything Dots feel free to PM me as I have said before or contact me on Planetdev as i'm on there most of the time. Dots NO.1 FAN!!!!!

Can't wait to see more coming up? Well, you're up for a surprise if you continue reading this post. ^^
As for the fire starter, I'm not going with an animal, at least, not for now. I've got an a clover for the grass starter and a mermaid/merman base for the water starter. I'm going to need a concept for the fire starter that complements both of the other ones, so any idea on that?

And thanks for the offer, I'll be sure to remember it. ^^

thanks for the offer dot, i'll think about what it'll be.
And Inku and Scrabbit are my two favs out of yours so far, keep it up. ;)

You're welcome, in fact, I should be the one thanking you for the name. ^^ And I'm happy for Inku and Scrabbit, since they seem to be the ones receiving most of the love.

As for the offer, it's completely up to you to send it as a PM whenever you feel like it. Just keep in mind that, as you can see from my works, I'm a spriter that prefers adorable pokemon, so sending me a concept I'll surely love would be motivating for me to work on. ^^

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Update:
An entry has just been added to the Pokédex!

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#002 - Cloble
Grass

Courteous Pokémon
~ Cleri (female) --Level 15-> Cloble --Level 30-> Clorincess ~
~ Cleri (male) --Level 15-> Cloble --Level 30-> Clorince ~
~
Respected for their dainty, polite nature, smaller POKEMON often
regard it as a guardian because of its thoughtful personality and
sensitive spirit. A trainer is usually proud of their accomplishments
when they find that their CLERI are evolving.

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I'm really happy of how this turned out, especially the floral frills on it's arms and flower buds. Also, the more desaturated palette seemed to give it the mature, yet kind look I was going for here.
However, the shading on the buds really annoys me, and I keep feeling that something is off there, but I just can't put my finger on it, so any help regarding that is most appreciated guys. Criticism is what makes me better, so if you really want to see me improving, don't forget to include at least a little bit of feedback on the sprite. Okay? ^^

Personally, I'm really hoping this concept receives positive comments. ^^
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[PokemonSkySD]

like the new sprite, but the lower right bud needs the shading worked into..
still really good.

I PMed you about the sprite. Hope you like the idea.

 

[NikNaks]

Whilst I think your technique is excellent, all of these sprites seem really samey, and consequently, for me at least, quite boring. They're all really sweet, happy little creatures, with round shapes and big eyes. I think you'd benefit from trying some more extravagant and darker designs. Even the fakémon listed as "Bug/Dark" still looks like a cute fairy, which is probably the idea - making it seem less sinister tricks the enemy - but I just think you could do so much more.

Anyway, keep up the good work! As I said, there's little wrong with your shading and line art, but I'd try something a little outside your comfort zone. Just my $0.02. :)

 

[Dots]

like the new sprite, but the lower right bud needs the shading worked into..
still really good.

I PMed you about the sprite. Hope you like the idea.

I know about the bud, since I've already mentioned that I'm going to need a few pointers to fix the shading. Thanks for the compliment though. ^^

Whilst I think your technique is excellent, all of these sprites seem really samey, and consequently, for me at least, quite boring. They're all really sweet, happy little creatures, with round shapes and big eyes. I think you'd benefit from trying some more extravagant and darker designs. Even the fakémon listed as "Bug/Dark" still looks like a cute fairy, which is probably the idea - making it seem less sinister tricks the enemy - but I just think you could do so much more.

Anyway, keep up the good work! As I said, there's little wrong with your shading and line art, but I'd try something a little outside your comfort zone. Just my $0.02. :)

Thanks for praising my technique, and for leaving feedback behind. ^^

Since the time I've gotten attached to the pokemon franchise, I've only been attracted to the pokemon that look cute or pretty. You can't believe how disappointed I was when my Totodile evolved into Croconaw while I was playing Crystal, and I guess that since then, I was imagining how a perfect region for me would look like. Sweet-looking, happy pokemon everywhere was how I wanted it, and now I'm back to thinking about it, reviving old concepts I had and revamping them while trying to create a region full of what I like.

I get what you mean though, and that is, I should include variety. Also, about Pierrollon, I kind of know that it doesn't look so evil/sinister as the dark typing implies, but I'm quite attached to that design now, and it'll be hard for me if I was to scratch that concept or the typing. However, I'll most likely be having a few evil stereotype pokemon in the dex so look out for them. As for the extravagant designs, you'll be seeing some of those in the enar future. ;D

I thank you again for the input, and I wold like to hear from you again. ^^

~ Edit: Sprite Update ~

I've updated Cloble's sprite and fixed the shading on the buds. I like it better now. ^^

--->

(Old > New)​

And as you guys already know, I'd love to hear criticism, so give it your all when posting. xD

By the way, I was considering changing Chrysil's design to make him more cocoon-ish, since he now looks more like a pudgy worm. T^T What do you think guys? Should I, or should I keep him the same (if so, could you specify why)?

 

[PokemonSkySD]

great improvement there.

About Chrysil, have a go with making a cacoon version, post it, and see what people think.

 

[Esper]

I've updated Cloble's sprite and fixed the shading on the buds. I like it better now. ^^

--->

(Old > New)​

And as you guys already know, I'd love to hear criticism, so give it your all when posting. xD

By the way, I was considering changing Chrysil's design to make him more cocoon-ish, since he now looks more like a pudgy worm. T^T What do you think guys? Should I, or should I keep him the same (if so, could you specify why)?

You know I think you've got a nice sprite for Chrysil already. If you can make it look as good as it does already then I say go ahead and change it. You can always keep what you have now and rename it as another bug.

I have one tiny criticism of your clover. The smaller eye is basically diamond shaped, yes? And the two points are at the upper right and lower left ends. I think you should switch those to upper left and lower right since that's the way the head curves in that area and the eye should match that. The legs look a little plain to me, but that if you like them then that's okay. ( '')b

 

[blackmoonflower]

I've noticed that the clover pattern on Cloble's face looks too straight with the way that the head is positioned, if that makes sense. What I mean is, the eyes and mouth make it look like it's looking slightly to its right, but the clover pattern on the face doesn't display that.

 

[Dots]

great improvement there.

About Chrysil, have a go with making a cacoon version, post it, and see what people think.

Thanks, and I think I'll only be editing it a little before I place it here for criticism.

You know I think you've got a nice sprite for Chrysil already. If you can make it look as good as it does already then I say go ahead and change it. You can always keep what you have now and rename it as another bug.

I have one tiny criticism of your clover. The smaller eye is basically diamond shaped, yes? And the two points are at the upper right and lower left ends. I think you should switch those to upper left and lower right since that's the way the head curves in that area and the eye should match that. The legs look a little plain to me, but that if you like them then that's okay. ( '')b

I think I'll either be spriting a new one and leaving the other one as part of another line like you suggested, or edit the original one slightly.

For the eye, it was diamond shaped because that's how I thought a round eye from the side would look. I think I understand what you're trying to say, so just give me a few seconds and I'll see how I can work that out.

... Here she is then, does the sprite look any better now?

Also, the legs are plain because when I tried to add the designs from the original concept it ended up looking too crowded for my liking. And I like her better the way she is now. ^^
Thank you for the feedback Scarf! ^^

I've noticed that the clover pattern on Cloble's face looks too straight with the way that the head is positioned, if that makes sense. What I mean is, the eyes and mouth make it look like it's looking slightly to its right, but the clover pattern on the face doesn't display that.

That's weird ... I don't see it. I just zoomed into the sprite, and the clover patten is placed a little to the right, just like the eyes are. Maybe it's because the head's a little smaller than Cleri but with a larger pattern? :S
I don't know how to fix that issue since I can't really see the error, but thank you for the input blackmoonflower! ^^

~ Update ~

So, I've looked over Chrysil's sprite and I just can't manage to get rid of him, or separate him from his evolutions. That's why I've decided to keep him, even if he is a little too simple. ^^ A few minor edits were made though, and those are just to make him more fitting with the rest of the line.

Here's the updated sprite:

--->

(Old > New)​

Now they all have blue eyes. xD

By the way guys, I've been wondering about what to sprite next, since I don't feel like spriting Merby, the water starter for my region. What do you think guys? Should I sprite Kissedy (Jynx Evo) or should I sprite Dandecub (grass type found early on in game)?

~ Update - Again -.- ~

Question before is still open, so you guys can still answer.

I've had a few minutes to work with, and I've come up with a new over-world. This time it's Chrysil. ^^

Chrysil, the Cocoon Pokémon
(Not for Public Use)​

And now the line is complete. xD

 

[Colbex]

Hm... I'm gonna have to say:
Kissedy. =3

 

[Myzou]

The thing that's really bothering me is the placement of the clover pattern on her face, in contrast to her eyes. It's very... asymmetrical.

I think it'd look better should the eyes be moved upwards more, more towards the center of the clover pattern, where the top 2 leaves meet the bottom 2. (Just using clover pattern as a description, not sure what you're aiming for)

However, with the current eye placement, it could just be the fact the head is designed to look as though the sprite is facing forward. With those eyes, the head would be much better if it were "tilted" as if the sprite were looking slightly to our left. Look at Cleri, it's head is smaller, and it's slightly angled to it's right, thus, making it look at though it's looking that way. Whereas this sprite is looking to the left, but it's head is pointed forward.