About the lack of comments:
In my opinion the reason you're not getting too many comments if because for the most part your screenshots have only been maps and while they're nice they're not enough to carry the game alone. People want to see some events, not just small/generic events like the "Get first pokemon" event that happens in pretty much every hack but unique scripts that are pertinent to the storyline of the hack.
About the updates:
The fakemon aren't really that great. The only one that truly looks like a Pokemon is the water starter and even that's a stretch. The grass starter needs to have a little more going on with it's design as right now it's unbearably plain. The red on the fire starts is too dark and throws off the color balance [it clashes with the orange] and the water starter looks fine, if a litte too big. There's a tile error in the labe [the thingy with the lights]. About the first update with the lightning storm, the colors hurt my eyes as they are extremely bright. I don't know why there's a thunderstorm going on indoors but the tiles hurt to look at.
Conclusion:
Don't get discouraged by the amount of comments in the thread just build on what you have. Remember: more events less maps. You've already proved that you're a great mapper, now it's time to prove that you're also a great scripter.
