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Sammyskitty, your fanfic ends on a scene that reminds me of a scene I wrote last night (while watching the 12-hour Pony Livestream event) where Scoots and the others talk about fillies who were taken.
Speaking of which, to answer ~Ryukaa's question, my fanfic is about the colt seen (thirty-one times) in the background of The Best Night Ever: Orion the pony. I use the Greek mythology of Orion and a few other constellations as the basis of my plot and twist it to fit the FiM canon rules (Ursa Minor, for example), along with a good old-fashioned fillynapping.
And... Welcome to the herd, Pachy! I love your OC pony.