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Alonia187

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    hi ya thanks for the request so welsome to my friend list so how are you ^__^
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    UT OH, muy importante!
    You added a post after your first chapter.
    You are supposed to click the edit button and add it at the bottom, then edit the other new post, and use the delete option.

    You can get infraction points if you don't hurry and change it.
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    Do you have any stuff I can read?

    I have two examples from my writing, although both of which come from the old version of Tear of Life so you'll get the chance to read them anyway.

    Wow all this running is making me type super fast. Got blood flow and I don't know where to put it LOL
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    Oh Romance!
    Yay
    I'm a romance lover.
    love to write and love to read
    I have like 5 minutes - the guy dressed as a girl is singing on America's Got Talent right now (AGT)

    I may have spent them though... I'll go check
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    I'm kind of curious, what genre do you write?
    Comedy? Romance? Sci-Fi? Fantasy? Adventure? Journey? Horror?

    My main are Comedy, Romance, and Fantasy. I don't plan on ever doing a true journey fic, because there is more to me than a same story about a Trainer who accomplishes anyway.

    But Garrett(main character in Tear of Life) isn't a journey trainer. He isn't there for the simple task of being the best Trainer ever. He fights for something much more meaningful than that (sure he doesn't see it himself for awhile, but that doesn't mean it's not there. Trust the author, they know things :P)
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    I know what you mean by typical, but trust me - typical, it is not.

    I have no mention of how a kid is late for meeting the Proffesor (NE-VA AKA never) or over description of breakfast, or a kid wanting to be a Trainer because of a match they see on TV - Not me.

    brb, off and on constantly, AGT is on and some of the acts are good and some are bad
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    I didn't get a chance to do the math before you told me :p
    (I was helping a new "trainer" with his new thread)
    I did figure out the math though. Too bad I read the answer to the problem before I tried it XD
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    You are the first to ask^^

    I'm dreading when October comes because that is when I have to drive(I have a sister who drove pretty great - great expectations for the nervous me) and then I have to get a job and I will never see this forum again :P

    Not really, but it will be rare and sad.
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    It is a comedy/romance(only about 5 chapters that doesn't get far into the story because that was when I realized I had to change it). With how far I got, that is all I got to do, genre style. The story goes much deeper. That is one of the reasons I stopped. It focused to much on the "before" of the main character and too much time making fun of Mew. I just found the story lacking true Pokemon believability but I think it is a good Comedy.

    WOW that was long

    Pretty much the first chapter makes fun of Mew. I got many compliments for that :P

    Most of the other chapters focus on romance with a little bit of Mew "poking" later.

    The new version is an romance/comedy/fantasy/legend/adventure fic or (what was the word Rekyht used?... not sure, but it was better than adventure, i think)
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    Did you say you were out of school?
    How old would that make you, 17, 18?
    Just wondering.
    I like reading an author's story, looking at their age, and seeing if it is up to par enough.
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    I know.
    I am already in production with "A Tear of Life"
    I have the original version - have for months.
    The new version is what I have to work on.

    You can't find the old version here, but if you want, I can send them to you.
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    The spelling and grammar was bad on it - that is one reason why.

    6th Grade? Nice.
    The ideas formed in my head 2 years ago, in 7th, and now, I am finally doing something with them ;p
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    You mean how I could tell it was better at a glance.
    A. Read it and see what I mean
    B. This is from the guy who noticed a spelling error without reading a story. Things stand out to me.
    C. You seem more organized - longer, more professional
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    I haven't had a change to read your story, but I will soon.

    It shows much more promise than "A Single Tear" (this is from a glance ;p)
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