The reason I didn't answer before is because you're supposed to wait at least 24 hours before contacting a moderator about a thread awaiting approval. As well as that, you're not supposed to hassle them about it- ie, don't send a PM AND a Vm, just send one VM.
Your thread was not approved because it doesn't really fit in the Beginners Lounge:
It says clearly in the Rules thread,
So your thread would have been more appropriate in the Teams Discussions forum.
But, it wouldn't have met all the requirements for that, either- it was a bit lacking in an introduction, it basically said "I need a hacking team to help me out". Yes, the story was pretty lengthy but that's not really a factor in Team threads.
So, if you want to make a stab at it again, then have a look at the Rules and Requirements of Teams Discussions. You should also have a look around at other team threads that have been approved to get an idea of what is needed. A lot of them have fancy CSS layouts, don't worry about that, it's the content that's important :)