Buoysel

does she?? well she's a crossbreed and does look like an eevee!

7 chapter! Woa! At least you have it better planned now! 30 seems like a pretty reasonable number. How long are your chapters going to be, do you think?

That's a really good idea! Mine's unfortunately a journey fic... so I got eight gyms to write...bleh. It took me eight chapters to get to the first gym! 8 x 8 = 64!!!! That's why I'm afraid to plan too much ahead...

Okay. XD

S.L.O.W. What's it been, six months? Feh. I'm at two pages (second or third attempt now, can't remember), with a bit more in my notebook. So it's getting there, kinda.

Heh, really? Thanks. I wanted something simple and appealing.

Hehe, that's good. I kinda started my story having no idea where I was going with it... and recently planned it out more, but not as much as I would like. I feel like it'll just be easier to let the story write itself. My other problem is legnth... it's gonna be rediculously long...

Well, at least you know how you write; it makes it easier to fix stuff. I'm not exactly sure how I write... I wish I could get myself to plan my stories ahead a bit more though.

Must be hard to write a story being indecisive...

I'm kinda opposite. I tend to stick to stuff and then refuse to give it up.

Still insane.

P.S. What's with the constantly changing avatar?

Yay!!! :)

Oy it goes that late!? That's insane!

No prob. Good luck!

Well, I didn't want to sound intrusive! It is your story!

Here are some ideas:

You could just have him disappear. Then his parents could hire a detective to hunt him down and have the detective be a means of revealing exactly what the other world Taylor disappears into actually is.

You could also just have him die from falling off a cliff into the ocean or be caught in a fire so his body would have been destoyed or lost. If it was the cliff thing, the parents would probably hire someone to search for the body. The fire would be easiest if you don't want to deal with writing parts of the story not about taylor, because everyone would assume he was dead.

I still stand by starting the story with the weird orbs. Or if not that, you can start with his disappearance. You can write a little news ad- have you seen this boy? at the beginning and start there.

Or you can use a combination of the above ideas or any other ideas you come up with. That is all these are- ideas. You're the writer. Brainstorm all the possible ways you can to start your story, pick the one you like best and run with it!

Oh cool!!

Good luck with your (almost) killing!

Yay!

What's C.E.R.T. stand for?

I kinda like the considered dead one, but I only know of what was written before. It would need more work though.

Strep Throat --- Damn....

I'll be unavailable for a while (must return to hospital), so I hope you be OK.

Congratulations!

I hope the machine works all right, no viruses and all that stuff, now that there are four of them going around wildly.

Oh and I just postd Chapter 2. Thanks for all your help!

Cool! Can't wait! But don't rush!

I would start with something exciting....

So are you going to rewrite the whole story posted thus far? Or just rearange the order?

And, are you going to do it in a new thread, or just edit the old one (I wanna know what to look for!)?