Sorry Camperuption but your acceptance is pending at the moment... You need to fix a couple of things before re-submitting it:
-The descriptioins of the personality and whatnot (minus the history) are really just too short. Please lengthen them to at least a 4-line paragraph, and add in some more detail.
-I'm having a hard time following the history for Heracross. You seem to have written it like an RP post, but please for clarity-in-the-sign up's-sake write in past tense without dialouge. It will make things much easer to follow :)
Thanks!
-The descriptioins of the personality and whatnot (minus the history) are really just too short. Please lengthen them to at least a 4-line paragraph, and add in some more detail.
-I'm having a hard time following the history for Heracross. You seem to have written it like an RP post, but please for clarity-in-the-sign up's-sake write in past tense without dialouge. It will make things much easer to follow :)
Thanks!