Citrinin

Hey, don't get me wrong, I enjoy a challenge. I just have a tendency to procrastinate. Do you like reading OT fics, by any chance? That may sound dumb, but I don't mean daark ones like yours seems to be.
On Friday, we did no actual work anyway.

Same. We got a short day on Friday, and the first Monday back is a teacher-only day, so it's 17 and a bit days of epicness. I have lots of writing to do. The next 7Day-7K challenge is in the second week of the holidays, I'm participating in a oneshot contest on Serebii, I have to write chapter 3 of the fic I'm co-authoring with Kanto Lover, I'm entering the Sunday Star Times Short Story Competition (too many caps!), and on top of that, I have my chaptered fic to work on. Urk.

I just want 5000 posts so I can get a blog. I can't donate, because I don't have PayPal. Suxxorz, if you'll pardon the 1337speak. Also, are you on school holidays?

I did that when I first joined the online Pokemon community (not here lol). I started RPing and stuff, and I was past a thousand posts within two months!

Well im actually going to start one tomorrow,and ive just posted my idea in the writers lounge.Theres not much on it because im quite tired but i may put on my prologue tomorrow:)

Wwow, ive got too add you as a friend, good story telling man:)

Well, you've made 146 posts in a little over a week, so I can see what you mean. I'm at 240-something, last I checked, and I've been here since January! XD

May I ask were you get your inspiration?

May I ask were you get your inspiration?

I was ill for ages last year, and I only just caught up on schoolwork. I really shouldn't be on here considering I'm at school :/ haha, I don't really care to be perfectly honest, because none of my teachers mind :-) Swine Flu's at my school now, so we're all being told to be extra careful. Aha, expect the teachers say it won't close unless there's a major shortage of staff. I play Pokemon in lessons and they don't care, cos I'm clever enough not to be taught. I don't need to do anything except coursework, which is part of my GCSE's, no idea what you call them where you are :/ I'm teaching some weirdo VBScript at the moment, I'm taching them better than their teacher according to them. :-)

With chaptered, heck no. That's why my first chaptered fic and all chaptered fics since petered out. No planning.

Anyway, I saw the review, and thank you. I fixed the first part, with Dubs. It kind of shows up later - "I've lost too many friends today" or whatever it is he says - so I added a little bit of colour there, and an extra line for him. Poor Plus only had one line, I think.

The other bit - "We saved the world, I guess" - is kind of meant to be a little lighter than the rest. The story takes a positive swing soon afterwards, and even though at that point they thought they were going to die, I wanted to foreshadow the happy ending. I'll chew on that one, though, and probably change it.

I basically start from a single, random sentence. In the case of Torn, I just had a mysterious figure saying "Go ahead. Shoot me." It was originally going to be Giovanni, but it ended up sounding like Cyrus, so that's how I left it. If it had been Giovanni, I don't know what would have happened with the story ^_^

And don't worry, I'm mysterious too.

Hehe, my first chaptered fic was called 'Faith', and I never worked out why.

That's great, thanks! I'm glad you enjoy it. I have read the most recent chapter of HWIMAR (lol), and let this VM serve as a Review IOU, OK? I'll review soon, when I have time.

Yeah what I had thought to do is have them go on quests (somewhat similar to impending gym fights), and go from there. Then have them all join together in either a tournament or a larger battle.

True dat (no I don't say that often XD) perhaps as a inbetween thing, by getting rid of a demon, one could say they are "vanquished". Though perhaps in the tasks I give, I do not want it all to be about assinating >.>

Haha, nice. I don't imagine my RP to be accepted in the next day however (once I do post it), but at least this time around it has more plot than my previous attempt when I nearly first joined (yes... XD).

Ironically the RP will probably involve murder and death (blood optional) >.>

If my post is eventually approved (once I get around to writing it), perhaps you could join :P Though I'd still be critical of the sign up XD

Especially that the weapons portion I'll require to be detailed for everyone. As well as as what people are wearing and what their demonic form looks like.

Pretty much, while the RP master, makes sure things go in check and such. Probably the most common rule when engaging with another RPer is not to "god mod" which means, writing for the other RPer. For example if someone RPs: "I slash Bob's legs making him fall." This would be unfair to Bob, as he did not get the chance for a counter attack. That is why, when writing stuff like this, detail is one's most important friend. As well as realism. I mean like if I say "I threw my sword at your heart" the other RPer might have a chance to at least prevent the heart attack (haha), but may still get hurt in the process.

So far, sort of like that all rp characters will be half human, half demon, and they will get their first pokemon, in the intention to better humanity and demons alike (both sides war each other). It plays out sort of like the beginning where characters can train. Though right now, I am unsure if I want there to be allowed, an older group, that are already protecting the place.