I've gotten a few things done. I still need to do the history, but other than that I'm done. If you see anything that needs improvement let me know. I'm not very good at personalities, mainly because I'm used to building it as my character interacts with others. I'm trying to get a grip on my characters make-up for the history, but about how long should it be? I mean, I try my best to get at least two, but it's your RP. And don't forget to criticise me! I love being corrected! ^^