Hmm... Well, first off, you wouldn't use something like "*sniffle*". You would say "Ikiji sniffled." and then follow it up with him speaking. But that's just me.
Actually, I don't see anything wrong with it. Maybe the person's title was just more catchy than yours? Just because it has more views doesn't mean its more popular ;D
Actually, I don't see anything wrong with it. Maybe the person's title was just more catchy than yours? Just because it has more views doesn't mean its more popular ;D