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  • it is...but the PR commander ain't planning an attack...oh well, you can be in charge :)

    you gonna state how many people you're gonna send into the battlefield and stuff.
    Scyther, the PR only has Canalave, so maybe it should be Canalave instead of Jubilife. The Humans are still taking over Jubilife
    hey Scyther, you're the General, so you should post more often :) sorry if i'm giving you pressure, but you people gotta plan your attacks like the Humans!
    I wanna go to america and you wanna leave?! Btw I need your post! Post in War so I can have a mission. Generals can give me a mission too. tell me to go to the Human base in Sunnyshore right now! :) it's settled
    I'm from Hong Kong :) and I use both English. American AND British. British in writing, but American when it comes to oral english
    thanks Scyther, any suggestions of a flaw for Lucifer?

    btw, the mystery will be solved in a few chapters, and you won't feel confused after that. what confuses you the most, may i ask?

    and you say the chapters need to change, and need to leave suspense right? well...since my chapters are about 2500-3000 words per chapter i can't really change much...the number of words per chapter's fixed already and I cannot change it, or turn a 2500 word chapter into a 4000 word.
    Protip: It's not considered constructive criticism if you aren't being constructive. The entire point of concrit is to bring up intelligent, well-thought-out arguments using specific details to illustrate your objective opinion. That is to say, you're not there to insult someone's work, nor are you there just to tell them what you thought. You're there to tell them specifically what worked and didn't and how they might improve so that they can learn and grow from what you have to say. If you just tell them that their story is common and bland but never bother to point out how or what they can do to stop writing in a way that's common and bland, they're just going to keep on writing common and bland literature because you conveniently forgot to specify what it is that made their work that way. It's pretty much exactly the same as me just saying "no" to you without really giving you much in the way of context about it.

    In short, read this, and if you really must tell someone that their work is common, at least bother to go in-depth about it. We have quite enough of those kinds of reviewers as it is, if you don't mind, and to be completely blunt by this point, those kinds of reviewers frequently don't realize that just leaving it at the equivalent of "you suck but I won't tell you why" actually serves to discourage authors more than help them. Any sort of one-liner reviews (which it really is if you don't want to go into any sort of detail -- even just by pointing out single instances in a chapter or whatnot to show you even bothered to read what that author had to say) tends to do that.

    Or to be even shorter, this entire VM is an example of constructive criticism. Notice how I'm telling you what areas you need to improve, why you need improvement, and how to improve them? Yep. That's what's meant by constructive criticism.
    Well thank you very much! Your RP really is one of the best I've read. And thank you again, I really do appreciate feedback on my work.
    Hey, i love making new friends so hello
    How are you?
    I love your avatar and profile by the way!
    of course Scyther.
    if you can be active almost everyday, that is. an RPer has to be active.

    PM. private message me the whole thing
    .__.; It sounds like Mental Zubat. XDD
    This is an alt, btw. ^u^ I've made 10 alts and my current goal is to make 100 alts in 22 days and 45 minutes.
    o.0 Waah~? I'm sure you double posted too! D:
    Oh and btw, do you have any alts? :D (yush I know I change topics really quickly, but that's how I roll. LIVE WITH ITT! XD)
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