Back!! :D
On second thought, I may have to cancel on that editing part. I have been so busy lately and I won't have much time. :c Thanks anyway though, gramp's. xD Haha, just kidding!
Even though I speed read, I haven't gotten that far, busy and all. :/ But I would gladly give my opinions and thoughts! On the one similar to the 'Kanto Conspiracy' I am up to the part where L summons Lisa to the headquarters. Bruce Fowler, I dunno why, but that is hilarious! xD
But there might be one slight problem with L. In Death Note, a super smart investigator (like the one you're using) name is L. But don't worry! I am pretty sure it'll be okay. :P