Hey :3 this is -Nocturnal, and you can't find me on the forums anymore, since i've left. My friends have been looking at your RP, and it kinda reminds me of my old one. Don't ask what it is. Anyway, they think that your RP should be equal, no 'generals' for the humans side etc, or it'll fail like my old one...
Anyway, maybe you should just allow one RPer to be Deoxys AND the general, to control the storyline and to stop it from flowing away! XD Good luck!
And I'm only doing this because 1. my friend's a sadist and 2. Your RP reminds me of my failure. Good luck!
I'll tell them that I've told the Equinox dude!