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Your intro just feels very very basic to me. There's no emotion, no feeling, it's just history and I need personality on top of history. You had a good start playing with the trapinch, that should be the whole thing.
you have some major editing to do if you want to get a solid spot in the roleplay, the most major one of which is a balanced party. :P I'm the special snowflake and I've taken that party through the game [Gen 3 and Gen 4] so I have rights. :P
It MUST be balanced and it must've FEASIBLY gotten you through Hoenn.
haha,thats the best part. Mew will still be naive about the whole thing. I'll most likely start the chapter and end it with the same phrase, slightly altered, as in past tense for the end chapter