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  • I'll be checking up on people the next few days, possibly removing them. If someone isn't replying to you give it a day or so ^^/
    :3

    Everyone loves Bad Apple from Touhou Project ;] Nah, it's up for everyone to use x3
    linky to a song's url filey thingy, from tumblr, or mediafire or whatnot
    Well, I've spoken to him only once, he seems like a nice guy, but still, it might be better to just wait and ask him :3
    Lol, yes indeed. Then we can discuss about Tacos and Labneh like there won't be a tomorrow xD

    A little bit, yes.
    Dastardly indeed, señor Foxrally! The SWAT need to take this matter in their Pokéman hands!

    Arab, eh, nice! I'm Mexican :O

    Actually, I use the word actually too much too x3

    Poop is nice.
    Algeria... I don't know where that's located at xD School started two weeks ago for me ;] Did you have fun in Algeria?

    Alaric is SO evil... He once read the label on a coffee bottle that said "shake before drinking", and he didn't shake it! :O
    That sentence is written right in your bio x3

    Sup sup sup?

    It's okay as long as Alaric gets hurt for sticking his nose where he shouldn't ;]
    I'm not really good in giving critique, but I'll do my best!

    For one, the right arm looks crooked. I'm not saying that it should be straight, because it will look weird. For example:



    See how unnatural it looks? If you want to make the arm look a little curved, check out how Elesa's arm looks like here:

    [IMG]

    It's curved, but not too much. It's straight, but it's a little curved. You might want to practice more on curves and lines, too, just to improve more. Speaking of straights and curves, the strap of the bag is too curvy and the lines are too ... messy? Most bag straps I've seen are straight (but not perfectly straight, like the first example!). See Brendan's sprite as a reference.

    [IMG]

    The pants are okay, but they could use a little bit of erasing, y'know what I mean? The left eye is also not seen much.

    As for the shoes ... I don't really know, honestly. Whenever I edit a trainer sprite, I usually just copy + paste shoes from other trainers and tweak them a little. You could also use some shading. I've edited your sprite in a few places so that you can understand what I mean:

    [IMG]

    (I failed on the arm, too :P)
    Just remember, I started from nothing. I began spriting without any kind of professional knowledge. I'm just a Pokemon fan who wanted to edit things, and I've had my practice. Just keep trying and you'll get there, okay? I see loads of potential in you; don't give up on pixel art!

    P.S. Sorry if I didn't teach you much. XD
    HEY!!! If you wanted someone to interact with your character, Milran the Miltank could. He's just sitting there in some benches just near Janna's Berry Shop. :)
    haha

    I said how not what :P

    Just so you know, you're welcome to resubmit you character in Novia. But you might need to bump his progress a tiny bit.
    Ah, I understand. But really though, you can totally drown me with requests you can request anytime! I remember in my previous shop, business was pretty slow so two of my friends flooded me with fusions and recolors. Making sprites is one of my hobbies so as long as I get a satisfied customer, I'm happy.

    Oh, and speaking of fusions, I'm working on some samples so I can finally make fusions available for request! Just thought you'd want to know that, in case you need a splice or two. :3
    Oh, wow, I just noticed that you placed my shop in your signature! Thank you so much! You don't need to credit me, of course, but thank you for the effort in spreading the word. :)
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