:3 Like I said it's still rough. I'm just trying to get things down, because I usually get discouraged if the thing I'm currently working on doesn't look good, so this way I can look forward.
It really doesn't seem like it's night. Is it moving or stationary?
It's a nice car. But nothing feels special about it. It's just there. Nothing pops and makes you go "this is pretty cool!", composition is what I'm saying.
You've got more room, I really think you should use it. I know that the summer races sorta counts as a summer theme but you've not captured any "summery" feelings.
This is a very strange thing to say, but your car has no emotion. It's not organic, and it's positioned dead center. As a general rule in art you avoid placing things "neatly", as it becomes boring.
With your actual pixeling technique, the only thing I can point out is that dither does not have to be 50% all the time. I know it comes from a doll site, but it works.