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I feel the same tbh, I don't even watch it now :p but I still bash XY lol.

Yeah, true. Especially Sailor Moon, but I don't think Hero can write awesome girls tbh, they're average. Lucy is the best one because her powers are unique and she's not too OP like Erza, or a fangirl like Juvia.

Great idea, Let me know what you think about it xD .. From Bleach? definitely Rukia so far. She's badass, mature and silly. I have only seen 20 episodes, so I might have more favorites. Uhm.. I ship her with Ichigo, of course<3
She likes rabbits and she sucks at drawing.. look at her :P <3


There is Orihime too, but meh.
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Ichigo is fine I guess.

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IKR? Oda makes the most beautiful backgrounds, it's so detailed. I know it's quirky, but I love it.
Perona is cute. Her eyes are weird, but it's fine. I like her... Boa? I don't know her yet. But wow, I googled her and she looks beautiful! <3 Can't wait to see her. My fav girl is Nami still <3
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Do whatever you want with Saber :D I don't think she will mind :p
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ALSO.. I think your art style is very similar to HxH. I haven't seen it yet though.

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That's great to hear. I really agree with you. I don't want to write an essay describing my Love for thr OS trio. You already know how I feel about them :c

Yay, Good job! I hate when women in an action based anime series seem to be portrayed as weak, dumb, only interested in love or irritating. This is just based on a general impression of the anime that I have watched. I am sure there are exceptions to this (e.g., Balsa in Moribito, Saber in Fate/Zero, Robin in One Piece etc.).

I can't believe you haven't, you seriously should xD but then again, always watch when your expectations are down. Having too high of expectations can ruin any anime... Bleach is becoming intersting now, I like it xD the Soul Society is the best arc.... Wow, you're catching up to One Piece xD... Perona is my fav too <3 she's awesome and funny!

Hmm yes please :D Draw me Saber holding a Clefairy LOL. Saber has many forms. I personally like these the most:

Saber Lily -http://images5.fanpop.com/image/photos/26000000/Saber-Lily-fate-stay-night-26044799-800-1017.jpg

Original Saber -http://static.zerochan.net/Saber.full.903939.jpg

Choose any of them, I'm fine with it. I chose her because she's hard to draw, since she's a warrior. LOL and I want to challenge you. Also don't forget my Clefairy xD

I like how you're developing the story and it's good that your original character will make an appearance in XY. DO not screw up like the Pokemon writers, please don't forget to bring them back. I mean, you worked so hard on them, and you don't want to waste your effort, right? but having a side story for each character is a great idea. I'm so happy for you. <3

Aw that's sad. You know I love my tsunderes lol, but it's fine. It's your story after all, not mine lol. but I like your characters, they sounds awesome xD especially the tomboyish rival :p I like tomboys.

Yeah she is. FMA is my favourite anime, which you already know. Winry is so well-written for a side character. I admire her. And yeah, I watched many anime that I lost count lol. but I recently started Bleach, and tbh so far the story is average :/ .. I'm on episode 10. What about you? Are still keeping up with One Piece? I'm on Thriller bark arc :3

Alright :D

LOL its okay :3
Wow. Wow. So you're not only writing one story, but another one as well. I'm impressed. You're creative and original, The coma part is really interesting *.* you should write XY really lol!
What about your characters? *uhm tsundere girl*

Aw thank you! It's Winry Rockbell.

Hey, let's talk in here instead of PMs :D .. How far are you into your story? .. btw your sig doesn't show up for some reason lol.

Glad to hear I wasn't too harsh, haha. Hm, if there are several 1,000 word paragraphs then it's most likely meant you will have to break it up into smaller paragraphs (as I mentioned to you before when you said your chapters tend to go to the 5,000 word count). Totally your choice if you want to keep the format you're having, but you're running the risk of losing readers that way. I can understand editing the format will take a while and editing stories aren't fun at times, but since you are posting your story in public your readers will expect some quality assurance. So yeah, I highly suggest for the rest of your story to edit the paragraphing. I apologize if this sounds forceful. D:

As to answer your question, I usually give it perhaps a few chapters although sometimes real life gets in the way and I'm unable to catch up on some story updates. I know some readers that are pretty strict and will only read the first chapter to determine if a story if worth continuing.

Hey! So, I noticed you posted Ch 2 of your story, but I saw you still have some scenes together into one huge paragraph. As I mentioned in my last review, it would be better if you have the story broken down in paragraphs. The reply you gave to my first review you were able to break it into paragraphs, and that's what I want to see in your story. I would check out a couple fics like Legend and The Origin of Storms to give an idea how you can do paragraphs.

Sorry if I came out too strong here! I think having your story in that format can make readers not able to follow your story easily. I'm a bit behind on reviews, so I might not be able to give a more proper review until the weekend at least. If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask!

Good, thank you. Guess who I am ... LOL.

Hello :D