Recent content by kidstaple

Alright, about four months ago I promised everyone that they would get the next chapter in this series. But because of school and some other complicated issues which I will not get into, I was unable to work on it, thus postponing it until I thought that I had enough time in my schedule to sit...

Chapter I: In the Shadows of the Sun Traffic gathered in Goldenrod City, congesting the main arteries that flowed through out the city and deep into the heart of it. Small clusters of humans as well as Pokémon made their way to the closest television screen, broadcasting the live event that...

The long awaited Chapter 10 of Bruno's Journey will be posted later on this week, possibly this weekend. (That is, if anyone is still waiting for it. And if they are, then I am sorry for the 4 or 5 month wait.) My Muse is kicking me in the butt for not writing on the story for a while, so after...

Hey everyone! It's been a while since I've been on or posted. I'm severely out of the loop and not afraid to say it. So, I thought I would tinker with this story idea that's been wasting away in my mind for the last year or so. I hope to continue to write it, but with my Muse, its hard to tell...

Amazing! Lovin' it tremendously. Good descriptions and awesome chapter. Keep 'em coming, I want more! Now! LOL.

Wow. Flippin' amazing. I like your style of writing. It flows well and you didn't have too many problems with spelling or grammar. I'm gunna keep my eye on this one, and hope for more... No, I'm gunna pray for more! LOL.

Well, I decided to jump into this fanfic on a whim, and am I glad that I did! OMG! It's good... that's all I got to say. I'm starting to have withdrawls and I just got done reading the thing! AH! I need more. Now!

I think I did mention it in that specific chapter, but then again I may have not. The whole idea behind the battling methods is to not let your opponent overhear you giving instructions to your Pokemon. So, if you would like, I can put a list of attacks at the end of each chapter, with...

The attack that Empoleon used was called Shadow Claw. It's TM 65 in the Diamond and Pearl games if memory serves me right. I hope to have chapter 10 up within the next day or so. It's taken me awhile to actually go through my Diamond game and get back into the swing of things. Look for it later...

Hey everybody, hope you haven't missed me too much. This post is going to fill everyone in on what's been happening and why I haven't been able to write anymore of my story. Some family issues have popped up within the last few months... well, since I last posted, and they have kept me away from...

Hey man, it's not a bad start to your story. There are a lot of things that you need to work on, such as spelling and grammer. Also, if this is your first chapter to your story, it isn't near long enough. It should at least be two to three times the size that it is now. Besides these errors...

LOL, antsy aren't we? I'm hoping to introduce all of the filler characters within the next two to three chapters from now. The reason I say that is, because there are a few things that will be introduced in the next chapter that will have to be adressed before I can move on with things. Oh...

Is the increase in description a bad thing? If so, I can tone it down a bit I suppose... I would like to know what you think, so don't be afraid to give it to me. I don't care if your harsh about it, lol. PEACE AND LOVE, kidstaple

I don't know, I'll have to see what I can do about it. Now, after almost three months of waiting, I give you Chapter 9! Chapter 9 Reinforcements The tall figure, who Bruno had just realized was his brother, bent low on his knees, helping his little brother up from were he sat. "I see you...

I'm glad to hear that. I really am. There for the longest time I felt like stopping, but now that I have some free time and my grades are sustained (for now), I'm gunna push through it and give you as much of Bruno and The Resistance's story as possible. I only hope there are more people who...