Mana1

Thanks again! You're a very good writer. :). I'll start right away! :D

Hi there! I've edited my post, I really hope you like it! :D xx

http://www.pokecommunity.com/showpost.php?p=7259691&postcount=303

hi swifty I'm gonna drop this here ok. <3

http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=283817 bump bump bump!!!

I'll kick Malik out of the Space dorm and have Alex all to myself ;D

Okay I totally love where this is going ;D Have two guys ever got married in a RP? ;D

"I'm in a hurry here!" Called a voice from behind Alex, right behind Alex. With an unsettling 'oomph' he was pushed to the floor, narrowly missing the confused Fang. A black haired boy, perhaps a little shorter than himself, stood over Alex.

... oh god I'm so shipping them now. xDDDD

Yeah, I will… I've just been busy reading Homestuck yesterday and today… anyways, I'll definitely get that done, although I don't think I'll catch anything… :\

Anyways, I still have to catch up with other people's posts, so I'll post later… tomorrow most likely

Your avatar makes me yawn when I look at it lol

Woah, my biologie is doing great, all thanks to your tips, thanks. I'm already on page 7. ( Typing it on word :p ). I really hope you will like it! =)

Oh but dude cherry is soooo much better! And 50% more colourful ♥

It does play online with other players, and there was a completely online game only in Japan.

But yes, it would be hectic to GM.

Please explain to me how this works and when I can do this next. \o/

Haha thanks! I hope you'll like it! It's a lot more detailed now, I'm using the Pokédex too, and I really hope I will be on the ship friday! :)

Thanks again, I now understand that I shouldn't type it like I am telling a story, but typing it like I am reading a book, thanks! I should think about how the person says things, and how they feel, I should think about their personalities, that also decides a lot of things in a story, thank you so much for all your help! :D Oh, and one question, how do you do a "spoiler" ? Thanks again! xx

Thanks. :D I just decided not to catch a pokemon, so the post came earlier.

Miranda strolled into Pewter Gym, quietly confident that she could take him down - especially now she had four pokémon. The first matchup was Peeka vs Brock's Geodude; Pichu was much quicker than the sluggish Rock pokémon, but Miranda had forgotten one important factor.

"Peeka! Use Thunderschok!" Pichu used thunderschok, but it had no effect! Brock started laughing.. "Did you forgot your type matchup lessons?"
Miranda suddenly felt really stupid..
"Geodude, Mudslap!" Commanded the Gym Leader, his pokémon quickly kicking up dirt and exploiting Pichu's weakness to ground-type moves. Peeka quickly fainted, overcome by the powerful Geodude.

Miranda thought more carefully about her next choice, thinking back to her type-matchup lessons, she settled on her newly caught oddish…
"Oddish, I choose you! Quick, use absorb!"
Oddish was still kind of weak, but with absorb, she also got health from Geodude.
"Geodude avoid! Use dig!"
Geodude disappeared underground, leaving Oddish scared and confused.
"You can do it Oddish! Concentrate… JUMP!"
Oddish jumped, but not high enough, and got hit by dig. She took a lot of damage, but Miranda had a sneaky move..
"Oddish! Are you alright? Use PoisonPowder!"
Oddish used PoisonPowder, leaving Geodude poisoned, it should be easy now..
"Oddish! Finish it with Absorb!"
With Oddish using absorb, the Geodude fainted. Which was a victory for Miranda!

Is this better? :d

Thank you so much! I've changed it a little bit, I now understand it better, thanks. :>.
I will detail it a little more, I now had a "real" battle with Brock, on to the other battles! :P

Thanks! I will work on it, is it okay if I take your piece of my fight against Brock? Than I will to the rest myself :)

Thanks again for your feedback, changed it, I've only been in Kanto and I have seven badges. xx