Wow really?? Cause it looks great - great job!! :)
Awww yay that's awesome, I'm pleased for them :) Sorry for the late reply, I was reading your story very thoroughly - thanks for the link! :)
I LOVED IT!! :D And no I'm not just saying that - it was really gripping and well written, I could seriously see it as an anime episode! :) I love the whole pink/purple thing going on lol :) Also the fact you have a trio on the journey is pretty cool - Tracy sounds like an interesting character! :) I also found it really funny :D Like: "Maybe they've blasted off before?" "Well you're strangers to us" and "I just wanted to know who you are,that whole thing wasn't really necessary" xD
Can't wait for Chapter 5!! :)