Yes, I saw it. Well, can you take critique without getting your feelings hurt? :)
The story is a bit strange. Who are Swampert, Blaziken and Sceptile and how/why have they watched you? Also you demand good SUs for the RP, but your own SU has only got one short line of text in each field. That's a bit contradictory...
And another thing. I noticed that many PMD RPs seem to die because one team member falls behind due to inactivity and that ruins the game for the other team members. Maybe you should have one player play a whole team?