Recent content by One Charmed Dude

This is still on a similar topic as the last poem...yeah...I'm love sick. You're the only one. You make me feel as though my life has just begun. With your love I can finally feel the sun, But without it, I fear my life is without fun. The beauty within you, Controls my dreams about us two...

I hope I'm not breaking any rules by posting now, but I've been busy, I suppose if it's necessary and a mod asks, I'll make a new thread but that would suck, lol:Here... To be defensive, is sometimes a great offensive. It teaches you how you must live. And takes all the patience you can give...

Thanks for the feedback, and ok I will!

wow, haven't been on in a while but here it goes...it's a very short one... Life isn't always a beautiful field, Sometimes cruel people penetrate your shield. There will always be at least one way, That an idiot trys to ruis your day.

thanks, well sad, i can try, they're not really my style though but here it goes... The darkness falls, And within the halls, Sadness rules inside. It's something from which no one can hide. Despair fills the surroundings, It's all puzzling and confounding. What can you do? I always ask too...

OMG A COMMENT!!! Thanks!!!I'll keep that in mind, here: Water, Fire, Earth, Air, They all keep each other's odds fair. Their power is of all They could never fall. Forever they will be, That's not up to you or me.

Haven't posted a new one in a while, but here it goes... Power is power, that's what most people say, But it forces us to praise it everyday. I'm sick of this nonsense, Let's end it forward and hence. Resolve our problems, we can, oh yes, How? Well take a guess. Rebell and stand up, Take...

don't be sorry, great woks take time!!!

this is a bit different from normal but here...PLEASE COMMENT I WANT FEEDBACK! Power within us all, Here for sring, summer, winter, and fall. All around us, here natur's powerful call. Wonders are forever, just as space, For everything has its very own place.

Well, I finally got here to read your fanfiction!!! It was great!!! I can't wait until you write more!!! The first chapter was great and so was the dream thing, that was really cool!!! I hope Ichiko wins her next contest!!!

here's a new one...Everything is connected, but rudeness should be rejected. Hatred, love, excitement and fun, which ever you feel, we all see the same sun. Though our alikenesses aren't complete, the things that are, are set in concrete.

I'd like to devote this to my friends and merry christmas and happy new year everyone!!!It's the joy I feel when you're near, It wipes away any tear. Banished is every fear. Thank you all my dear friends, I know we'll be together until our ends.

HEY YOU GET OFF MY CLOUD, Fall in with the rest of the crowd. I'm over you and your friends, Your control is at its end. I've overcome all my woes I no longer fear you, my foes.

please comment on this one!!! You cry, oh wa, poor you! I'm sick of your attitude and of your face, can't you just get a clue? You betrayed all you had, but that's no longer my problem, I'm not sad. Get out of my face, get out of this place. You ruin it for us all, so get out and let yourself...

haven't posted any new poems for a while...but here's a short one Hello goodbye, why oh why? People just leave, they just fly. Sometimes it's bad, sometimes it's good. I have always handled as mucha s I could. There's a power in that, and not just you, so hold to your dreams and let go less...