Recent content by Oz37

Cutlerine, thank you so much for your input. Part of my issue with writing this fic is that I've not had too much constructive criticism along the way. Sometimes (often) I get too wrapped up in the words and vocabulary and I just like to revel in it... too much. I will definitely try to pull...

Chapter Five: Friends for the Road After giving me some tips on how to use my new device, Hunter offered to escort me out of Luster Ridge and part of the way to my next destination. I readied myself with my bag slung across my chest and my Pokéballs back in my possession, excited to...

Chapter Four: The Pokémon Professor Gaia stamped anxiously in place, facing off against Cindy’s refreshed Tepig. Gaston and his trainer were filled with confidence after their easy win, but I wasn’t intimidated by the Valley Girl and her pig. “Alright, Gaia! Have fun out there!” I hollered...

Chapter Three: A Starter for Simon The eastern mine shaft consisted of one winding path with no branching tunnels, and daylight peeked around the corners at me within ten minutes of my encounter with the Gleaming Rock. Caesar and I rushed toward the exit, both of us in need of escaping the...

Chapter Two: The Gleaming Rock My journey’s advent had filled me with a burst of adrenaline, sure to spur me swiftly on my way. Blood pumping and heart pounding, I flung myself into the mines after Caesar, determined, anxious, exhilarated… and suddenly horrifically lost. An hour after rushing...

Aw, thanks for the welcome! To be honest, this is the first firm welcome I've gotten in a forum! I will definitely be hitting the game section (especially if there's any postulating about 6th gen... cuz I like to postulate...), and my fic is coming along. I don't consider myself an "author" or...

Thank you so much for your comments! I've already written up to Chapter 4 and posted them elsewhere, so I'm reluctant to make any changes based upon your suggestions (though I certainly appreciate and somewhat agree with you guys). However, I will say that I initially intended for the Prologue...

I just noticed that I posted my fics to three sites that you, as well, posted yours at. Since I've been seeing your fic all morning as I've gone around posting, I figured I'd comment. So far, I'm really liking it. I'm not big on tons of language, but I understand your use of it to show off...

Hello, readers! This is my first attempt at a Pokemon fanfic, and I'm very excited about it. Check back in this first post for updates! UPDATE: There have been various issues preventing me from working on this recently, but I finally posted Chapter Five and seem to be on a good writing...

My name is Oz, and I'm new to the forum. (In my head, I just heard a resounding monotone reply of "Hi, Oz.") I've been at BMGF for a few months now, but I wanted to expand my horizons. My main interests when it comes to Pokemon are the videogames (non-competitive play) and fanfics. I hope to...