I took a look through your thread after adding the images and I can't approve it. There just isn't any format to it. I would have a look through all of the other hack threads on here so that you can get a feel for how things are done.
Also, scripting. You need to go find a good XSE tutorial. Hackers don't count bytes in scripting. The script editors have built in dynamic functionality that dynamically allocate the necessary amount of space. For example:
#Dynamic 0x800000 //The offset of where to start looking for free space.
#org @start //Our first function
lock
faceplayer
msgbox @msg 0x2
release
end
#org @msg //Our message.
= Hi, this is a message.
When you compile this, XSE will asses how many bytes each function needs and compile everything into the free space. Each @label gets its own setup and personal search.