Ray Maverick

Smashing eh? You've gone british on me. :P

Maybe... :D

I guess we'll see. :D

>.>

Okay.... Maybe I won't read it then... *Shrug* :P I'll read it after my date, hold your ponyta. ;)

Because being invisible is awesome. :P

Haha, you should feel bad! Nah, just kidding. I might be going out today but I'll give it a quick read over after that. :P

I'm a spy, don't you know? :P

I'll try and read it later today, I haven't had a chance yet. I collapsed in bed last night, was soooo tired.

Hmm. I haven't gone anywhere. :P

NO

spent all my time masturbating to Katniss skins D:


EDIT: I ment Katarina xP

just realized I didn't sleep at all tonight/last night

ban her then =P

Pfft, all champs are OP when they are released so people will want to buy em, then they get mega-nerfed =P

I've never played Rengar, but he is Effin annoying....

*JUMP*
"You have been slain!"

Pfft, everyone knows Amumu out jungles Rengar.... LOL WHO AM I KIDDIN

*uses bandage toss on Ray*

*toggles on tears, and spams tantrum*

*pings team*

"Krazzikk is legendary!"

;3

Rengar ganked! HOW IRONIC

Oh, and btw...

Hi. =P

It's just some random piece of art that I found. It really spoke to me and I connected with it. :)

Oh really? I didn't know which one I liked better so I reverted. I'll switch back to the other one. :P

Fair enough. I only write like that when something very important happens in a character's life. :P

David looked down at the small, defenseless person in his arms. His eyes swelled with tears, not of sadness, but of joy. This little body that he held, no, this miracle, it was a part of him, yet it wasn't. It was separate and distant, yet close. No words could accurately describe the feelings that flooded him; like the storm surge of a hurricane crashing its way through a levee, his emotions raged. Among this turmoil of emotion, joy, relief, determination, pride, and most of all, fear. Fear that he would not live up to what this little person needed him to be. Fear of being the very evil he suffered under the hands of his own guardians. Fear of failure. This little life was his to protect, nothing mattered more than that, David knew this. After all, he was indeed a father now.

Just my very poorly written example. I was always told it wasn't enough to say that somebody was scared, they had to say why. (Unless the reasoning is obvious to the audience, such as a killer with a knife.) I'm sorry if I'm not conveying my thoughts in an eloquent manner. :P

I think it should definitely be a fine balance. Maybe a more detailed description wouldn't hurt, especially in the feelings department. :D

Well, I thought you meant a complete change in style. :P I'm always for more detail in writing, I need to get better at it myself. I think sometimes writers can go overboard however, for example:

"She put down the toothpaste, it was minty, brilliantly so, like the kind of minty freshness one would expect from a sprig of freshly chopped mint leaves. So fresh, so pungent, so clean. She couldn't even accurately describe how minty it was, but she liked it."

See, I think when people go into crazy detail like that over something stupid like toothpaste, well it's a bit much. :P Yes, I did just write about toothpaste.... >.>

It's hard to change writing styles, but not impossible. Can I have a sample of the style you're thinking of changing to? :D

*bows* Thank you, thank you! I know, I'm amazing. ;)