Santalune Forest

Don't worry at all! That's understandable. Sometimes I feel like I'm online way too much too. xD;;;

Sounds good too! So long as you work and keep practicing. Sometimes I wonder what sites to use for good Pokemon fanfiction, ff.net just doesn't seem to cut it anymore :(

Just found it online a few years ago.

I'm just trying to make more friends lol.

I'll be sure not to show you it since spoilers and whatnot :D

Ahahah neat! I want to write an ORAS fic... eventually. uuurgh

That's a really interesting plot, actually! Why did Team Flare offer him a stolen Pokemon?

Ahaha I know what you mean! I can't read stories that're overly descriptive. q~q If you prefer going for something a little "quicker" and more simplistic then I don't see why what you have here wouldn't work. We all have our preferred styles. :)

Hehe. xD

That's a great start! From a reader's point of view it's still a little bare but a noticeable improvement over the last version. I'm itching to open up a writing program and get writing all of a sudden now.. hah.

All righty. ^_^ Looking forward to it, I'll be back from work a little early today. :3

That looks good so far but the descriptions are very quick and bare.. which can be good or bad depending on what you're writing and what style you're going for. But I'm not given much to visualize if everything's described as simply as it is; if you could be a little more in-depth with some of the descriptions, that would be great. n~n

Can do! Looking forward to it. :3

I can definitely try to help out! Though I'm leaving in an hour for kickboxing if you wouldn't mind waiting a little for future replies. :(