Tbh Zappy, What Derozio said was somewhat wrong
Your flow is correct, What Derozio didn't notice was where his arm was pointing. In this case there could be two flows, you chose the trickier one. I feel you pulled it off wonderfully. The text I thought made the tag really pop since it compliments the flow and makes the tag look...."Special" Can't really describe it. And as for the colors, I feel it could be even more blue. It looks great but there's a couple mix in colors. Overall I thought what Derozio said was wrong in several ways but also right. Kiu~