Sleepy Dwarf, I see that you tried to participate in the MLP RP, so I have to tell you a few things.
The first thing is that, sadly, that RP hasn't been active in almost two years.
Second, if you want to submit a sign-up, always head to the Roleplay Lounge and find the OOC thread for the RP you wish to join (though in this case, signing up would be no use).
Finally, and most importantly, SUs (Sign-ups) need to be rather lengthy compared to what you posted, so I propose looking at these threads to hone and sharpen your roleplaying abilities.
http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=287790
http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=116591
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Arw_AqWl8nAPq9Y7ELS0Rlp0adr3mm37nsZFNR_YhRs/edit
Welcome to the Roleplay Corner, by the way!
The first thing is that, sadly, that RP hasn't been active in almost two years.
Second, if you want to submit a sign-up, always head to the Roleplay Lounge and find the OOC thread for the RP you wish to join (though in this case, signing up would be no use).
Finally, and most importantly, SUs (Sign-ups) need to be rather lengthy compared to what you posted, so I propose looking at these threads to hone and sharpen your roleplaying abilities.
http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=287790
http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=116591
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Arw_AqWl8nAPq9Y7ELS0Rlp0adr3mm37nsZFNR_YhRs/edit
Welcome to the Roleplay Corner, by the way!