Squirrel

obhan gangnam stayel

Lolz. Thanks Ozzy

I just collected a random egg of which I didn't know it's contents. RNG? Pfft!

Ahhh! That's who I put in the daycare. Makes sense now.

Idk...hatch it.

He's been snorting Lucky Charms. You had it right the first time. Idk why they're offering shinies. When the event was first introduced it was planned that everyone would just end up with everyone else's mons, but we changed it so that people who didn't have shinies could participate. Turns out ppl have shinies. Oh well. But yeah...don't matter what you donate. Just pay me birch.

Noooo~ You're mon's not gonna be given away. The mons that you see in the prizes section are the prizes. :P

It took me a month to respond? Yeesh.

Actually, that kind of answers the first question. I haven't read a Pokemon fanfic without the intentions of reviewing it in over a year. So all I've read are ones that very clearly need improvements. You could try the Fanfiction of the Month list, which is the best of FF&W as voted by the community. If you want to read a bigger variety than just what PC offers, I'll find the list my friends suggested for me that covers various sites.

As for your own writing, my only suggestions are:

-Grammar could use a little cleaning. There weren't any major mistakes that were distracting. I only found them when I went looking for them.

-More description. I don't know if maybe it was from the format of your post (since it's not actually a story but it still is), but I would have liked to see more of the character's thoughts and feelings. This got better towards the end of the entry when Cheryl died, but it was missing a little in the beginning. There's also the advice that Pokemon battles could always use more description to make them interesting. Up the stakes a little. This will also add to the Pokemon's personalities so that their triumphs and possible deaths hit the reader harder.

I hope this helps and makes a little sense. I can explain more if need be. If you have any other writings, I'd be willing to look them over and hopefully respond to them sooner than a month!

i need cuteness

lalala

He's not invisible anymore... make up your mind!

YES! NOW YOU LOOK LIKE A LEGIT POKEMON TRAINER!!
GO FORTH MY MINION-I mean GOOD FRIEND!!
>.>
<.<

KAY

Idk actually maybe one of my friends at school xD.How bout you :3?

All right. I'll make sure i'll let you know. :3

hmm...Maybe a "fire" theme?

Haha don't worry! I forgive you xD

I recommend you wear hats though. They're really HIP and NEATO