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  • Awesome! I can't promise you though when I'll have the review done as...I got a whole bunch of stuff I need to do, like this one group project that's due this week...^^; Not only that, I got to get the next chapter of NE ready to be sent to my two betas. In any case, will try to review by this or next week, though.
    Hey, sis! Guess what? I reviewed your One Shot "Non Sequitur"...but at fanfiction.net. XD; Here's the review I had written. Sorry that it sucked. ^^;

    Hey, Sunnybeam. This is me, Bay. Sorry for the LONG WAIT...been really busy. ^^;

    I say, this is an interesting piece. Like how this is all in Mystil's POV. At first in the first part of the story you seemed to jump events from point A to point B a little too fast, like from Mystil's capture to suddenly talking about the battle with Crasher Wake, but I guess you did that to moreso go through the events more important to this short story. The part at Mt. Coronet is what got me. You really portrayed the events and the emotions well.

    There's one other thing I want to mention real quick.

    "The first time Kalia truly took note of his peculiarity was several weeks later, in the battle with Crasher Wake. The rest had fallen; Staravia, Gastrodon, and Machoke at the end of Gyarados' powerful attacks, Grotle and Luxio from Floatzel's vicious assault."

    Real quick: are those Pokemon all of Kalia's or both Kalia's and Lewis' Pokemon?

    Anyways, enjoyed this one shot a lot. Looking forward to The Sixth Warrior. ^^
    I'm to the point that I want to start typing, but I couldn't decide what Pokemon to use. But when you mentioned the part about "forgetting about animal equivalents," I decided to go ahead and use my favorite. I was going to use a smart Pokemon, but trying to make a pokemon seem animalish sounds fun, and like a challenge.
    I don't have my laptop because it died, and it was only supposed to take 7-10 business days to fix it, but that was 24 days ago. I find it hard to type very much on a desktop, so I have not been able to write much. I am currently musing a chaptered fic with the POV of a Pokemon. I guess you could say that it might be simulat to Jack London's "Call of the Wild."

    I have quite a few things planned for said fic, but I just can't bring myself to write much on a normal keyboard.

    I can't wait for the next Fuega chapter.

    You should come back to the lounge. (Just beware of the Sentrets with flame throwers, or the chansey with chainsaws.)

    BTW, cute avatar.
    They are some stupid new way for noobs to annoy the staff members.

    The picture I posted is from the "PC IS MY LIFE" emblem. and part of your user old user name apparently was part of the screen shot when the emblem was made.

    The Official Thread.

    One can be found on Ausaudriel
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