Oh uhh okay. Might be a bit harsh though.
Everything justs tops as soon as the render does, which isn't good.
There's not any flow to it at all just, some grungy smudging.
The pen tooling way off, and your covering up or distorting parts of your render which shouldn't be.
It needs to focus on his face more, instead of the tet and the middle of his body.
And then, the text stands out a too much, and is too big.
The font isn't great either, and your choice of words is kinda...
The borders aren't equal, and the top border is eww.
Sorry about that.