Banjora Marxvile

I see this a lot these days so you're not the only one who makes this error, even when I'm talking to someone face to face. Anyways, I'm not saying that there are errors everywhere; just a few here and there. The whole thing just needs to be tidied up and polished. It's not as bad as I probably made it seem at first.

Er, I didn't say it was impossible to fix. It's just that given the way it was written, even if I had gone through and rephrased everything, the article at its core just didn't seem very good. Like I said, it was more like a description of the hack than an review.
If you don't want to rewrite the entire thing, I could go through and actually point out what I think needs to be fixed but even after I do that, you're still probably going to need to do some further revising.

oh! i must look under my bed. no, no! hmm... that cup over there.... *calls out to mom* "Mom! can i nickname that cup just as i nickname pokemon?" Mom: "do whatever you want. dont ask me rubbish." Tidintidin~ Cup is now known as Holy Grail!

..... ill have to go exploring in israel or greece or rome that way....

so u were talking about this only... no chubby mystery?

ofcourse i know what the holy grail is. in which jesus drank in the last supper. no one found it. (pls. dont tell me u were talking about this only.......!)

so u havent found it. u know "anything" about it? anything? (god, i love mysteries!)

have u found it? is it chibi's secret stuff?

lol! i thought i will have a test of some sought.......

"Will I regret this... Added. However, to prove your true worth, you must find the Holy Grail! Only then, will you be shown teh Chibiness! " what the heck do u mean by this?!!!

Heya! ^_^ hows it going?¥.¥

that's true.

and okay, sometimes i'm really busy, and sometimes i just forget about this place..D: i'll try not to though. and i should get going. i'm getting really tired, and an afternoon nap would feel really nice about now.

it was great meeting you/talking to you. :]

good bye~

ah. oh well. i'm visiting here more often so i'll try and reply quicker.

it's nothing to be proud of really. people tend to think of me as rude and stuff because i just talk. D:

i just flat out don't think. then people look at me and laugh because i said something really dumb. :x

btw, do you have an account on serebii forums? i tend to be more active there. :p

haha. timid timid. i tend not to think things over before i say them, and i can end up looking like a total ass. :x

mood swings my good sir. you see, every month in a young girl's life she experiences..........:P

haha. kinda. i have my weird bipolar moments, tbh.
but i'm in a grumpy mood as of 2 hours ago...D:

=D friend request!

thanks. even though i've been here for 4 years, i never talked to anyone. up until recently. :P

:] it's hard especially in high school with brats like running all over your face like they own everything. but i bet you're cute. ;D

aww, thank you. ;-; i'm so self conscious. D: