There is a little problem, though- you posted it in the board for pokémon related FORUM GAMES. As the own board description says, "Pokémon Trivia. Make your own games and trivia, or play games made by other members. Non-Pokémon Trivia goes in the Other Trivia forum."
The story is perfectly pokémon related, but it's not a forum game, as I said in the closing post.