Sorry about the random break in conversation right there. I've been pretty distracted lately.
Aaaanyway, hmm. More excitement, maybe? (I don't know. Maybe it's just me, but it seems like the less angst in a fic, the more characters do something -- like, they don't brood so much as kick ass and take names. On the other hand, I might just be partial to action fics.)
In any case, I can't wait to read it! The last version was pretty interesting. It's just a shame I didn't scoot in and leave a comment.
Thanks for the compliment, by the way. That really means a lot to me. (Especially since there's been some drama about it. I'm guessing you've heard the other half, but hey. I'm about ready to let it go if they are, you know?)