you're a great RPer :) but your RP example in Chaotic Movements can use some spaces, or it'll be too messy. start a new line when you have a dialogue and it'll be just perfect :) something like this
This was it finnaly the morning had arrived, Josh walked outside and felt the cold crisp morning air blow on his face, today was his birthday, today was the day he left to join the chaos movement initiative and finnaly avenge his fathers death. Suddenly he felt the prssence of his mother behind him.
"So todays the big day huh?" she asked unnable to hide the sorrow in her voice completely unaware of the true intent of his journey.
yeah you get the picture, just a suggestion from another lucario fan. hm....nobody's joining, i wonder why...maybe you're not famous enough here...only 124views..hm...seriously your RP deserves more views there, buddy.
P.S. an RP with 15 members, that's fine...but if they are awfully active (some of my friends are), there'll be some 'Chaotic Movments' in your RP, if you know what i mean *winks*