Hello there, Pppgggr (did I type it correctly? xD)
I don't think you'll know me, but, as the name says, I'm Vato, and yes, I do happen to liek em' Minccinoz.
I have sent this VM regarding your first post in Pokemon Fallout.
If it is your very first time Roleplaying, at least in this forum, then I must take my hat off, for your post, despite short, serves as a great way of introducing your characer :)
Just a thing, in order to avoid confusion, you should put speech in quotation marks, so that instead of You were tiny back then, he mused it reads like "You were tiny back then," he mused because that way readers know when the characters are speaking and when it's just narration.
Despite that, I do have to say that it is still a great post, and I hope to read more posts of yours while randomly browsing around :)
If there's anything you neeed to ask, or just want to waste some time talking to random people, this is the place ;)