The two of you, meaning you and pokefan9900, throughout the beginning of the battle, have been posting underneath the mandatory 100 word count, which may be hard to check if you're posting straight onto the site and not writing in Mircosoft Word, but that's okay.
However, you will need to make your posts longer. I have a suggestion towards you and pokefan9900, if you two haven't decided so already. One, pay more attention to details, what your character is feeling, what your Pokemon is feeling, what the environment is, so on and so on or two, you can create a joint post between pokefan9900 and yourself, but both of you would have to agree to writing together.
I hope you have a nice morning/day/evening. :)