True that, it'd take an immense amount of effort anyway. Ah, perspectives. It's like putting an object in the middle of a room and standing at different spots to view it.
Well that is natural, I suppose, and I doubt it'd be any poet's intention to impose their ideals onto readers that know nary or enough. Humanity was the word I had in mind too; cursed thing I'd like to shed.
I can see the Spirited Away and all the mystery influences. I find it innovative how you utilized a static setting (arguably, but the interior of a moving train is, well, immobile). It gives me a bit of a Baccano! atmosphere (Not sure if you've heard of that anime; most of its scenes occur on a lengthy train ride). It does look quite grand and eloquently put.