Hows this Idea sound?

lol powder monkey

I wouldn't trust a little kid to be my doctor or my cook. Just saying.

Valentine said:

Hey, has anyone actually searched "cold ones" in Google before? Because it's hilarious the things that you actually get from doing that.

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Homestar runner?

Valentine said:

Don't get me wrong. If you've got a reason to use Lucario (or Riolu), go for it. But it just seems like a lot of people tend to use it (or them) because they're cool. >_>

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Really only because it's anthropomorphic, but Clefairy looks funnier anyway.

I had a plan for Elekid and Magby.They'll be rivals in their roles. But when you mention it yeah, a Baby Pokemon as a doctor, hehe. Well considering it is Mystery Dungeon, he could be pretty experienced but still be a Baby Pokemon. Perhaps I could start them off as either Second Evolved forms or alternatively make them both cooks and add a new doctor.

I got all the characters and their personalities set so I'll start working on the story. The characters alone took up like 2000 words so I have a good feeling about this. Expect something soon. I might even post the character sheet just so you know what to expect. Despite having these character summaries you'll see alot of this in the actual story.

Looking forward to it. ^_^_~

Anyone want to check through the first chapter for any mistakes/comments? Help would be greatly appreciated.

I like the idea with Elekid as a doctor, he could give electric shocks if someone is dying :D I like whole idea!

I like the idea of this fic, of course I also really enjoyed both Mystery Dungeon games, as well.

I look forward to (possibly, since I get lazy) reading it!

Anyone wanna check out chapter 1? I needed 1 more person to check it before I think it'd be ready for release.

So far the story is pretty good. If you keep this pace up or slow down, it'll never be done though

Ahoy! I've made 3 chapters so I think it's time I release the first one.

A Pirate's Life for me!

Pretty advanced writing, very professional though I have something bugging me. You used Crawdaunt for water pkmn, why not Whooper, he would be the clown of the group and kinda make the story more exciting. Otherwise, nice job.