My New Hack: Pokemon Dark Shadow

notbob · May 18, 2009

Pokemon Dark Shadow Version

READ THIS: This is a revamp off of my failed hack: Pokemon Carnelian. It has the same region, same world map, it is not a new or different region.

Hack of: Leaf Green
Story:

Spoiler:

Pictures:

Spoiler:

New Legendary:

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Graphical improvements:
Gloomy graphics for that dark feeling.
Videos:
None yet. :shocked:

Banners:
Made by ageangel:

Code:

[COLOR=Blue][SIZE=4][SIZE=3][SIZE=4][SIZE=3][[/SIZE][/SIZE][/SIZE][/SIZE][/COLOR][COLOR=Blue][SIZE=4][SIZE=3][SIZE=4][SIZE=3]img[/SIZE][/SIZE][/SIZE][/SIZE][/COLOR][COLOR=Blue][SIZE=4][SIZE=3][SIZE=4][SIZE=3]]http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/1400/nop[/SIZE][/SIZE][/SIZE][/SIZE][/COLOR][COLOR=Blue][SIZE=4][SIZE=3][SIZE=4][SIZE=3]tob.jpg[/img][/SIZE][/SIZE][/SIZE][/SIZE][/COLOR]

Made By Me:

Code:

http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/8587/pokemondarkshadow.png

Code:

http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/8587/pokemondarkshadow.png

Things/ People Needed:

Scripter
Pokemon inserter/spriter/maker
Ideas
Beta Tester
World Mapper
Tile/ Palate Editor
Overworld Editor/Maker
Spriter
Title screen editor
Text editor

Development team:
Me - Mapper, Palate Editor, Title Screen Changer, Text Editor, Tile Editor

PM me if you want to join!!

Banjora Marxvile · May 18, 2009

The Fakemon coud use a little work (like Body proportioning, and Shading). Who created it? The map is too much like Viridian Forest, and that was fairly unnatural, and the tiles aren't the greatest in the Worl, due to the green mountains.

Region Map looks a bit too clustered. try making it bigger with more routes (and longer ones!)

Good luck!

Mana1 · May 18, 2009

Marxville - that map IS viridian forest, all he has changes is paint-like green thing for the trees.

The world map looks a bit weird, it has a ton of empty space to the left hand side and the shape is rather... Odd.

The story doesn't actually make sense, you missed out a line saying someone stole the Pokemon (aka. Him I think?)

notbob · May 18, 2009

The Fakemon could use a little work (like Body proportioning, and Shading). Who created it?

I made it

The map is too much like Viridian Forest, and that was fairly unnatural, and the tiles aren't the greatest in the World, due to the green mountains.

That's because I am not done with it, they aren't green mountains. They are mountains covered with leaves and other plants, plus I kinda fixed it up, so the inward corners don't have that green line.

Cheesymitten · May 18, 2009

Everything looks a bit too like the original(That looks like a celebi sprite)
But with some work i'm sure you could make it happen.
Looks like a good hack though. :)
Good luck :D

notbob · May 18, 2009

SwiftSign said:
The story doesn't actually make sense, you missed out a line saying someone stole the Pokemon (aka. Him I think?)

Yeah, I forgot to mention that.

I also NEED someone to either give me a new world map or put on in themselves. I forgot to mention that I need someone to put in music, because my computer doesn't want to load Sappy.

cheesymitten said:
Everything looks a bit too like the original(That looks like a celebi sprite)
But with some work i'm sure you could make it happen.
Looks like a good hack though. :)
Good luck :D

That's because it's its evolved form.

Can someone give me their opinions already?

I'm working on new scripts currently...
This one doesn't seem to compile right:
#dynamic 0x720ACE

#org @start
lock
faceplayer
msgbox @yesno 0x5
if 0x1 goto @yes
if 0x0 goto @no
release
end

#org @yesno
=Would you like a berry?

#org @yes
giveitem 0x87 0x01
msgbox @yay
release
end

#org @no
msgbox @sorry
boxset 0x6
end

#org @yay
=Thank you.

#org @sorry
=Well, that sucks.
It's supposed to give you a berry for if your Pokemon is poisoned, a Pomeg berry.

The banner's in guys!! Thanks Ageangel!

gummybarz · May 19, 2009

This is quite bad, First your story needs a little fixing, The celebi evo doesn't look right at all i recommend hiring a spriter, Another thing about the celebi sprite it's green for the front and red for the back what? The map isn't orignal i recommend reading a tut on how to design one. The only thing i even see good about this hack is the banner ageagel made. But i could be wrong (I don't think i am) but i could be. Maybe your prove me wrong and when hack of the week,

Spoiler:

I'm a little harsh because i think your hack can go far, Never let these things upset you just take them and improve.

~Dmartin

notbob · May 20, 2009

pokemon xd said:
This is quite bad, First your story needs a little fixing

How so? I think it's pretty good.

pokemon xd said:
The celebi evo doesn't look right at all i recommend hiring a spriter

Can you do a better sprite?

pokemon xd said:
The map isn't orignal i recommend reading a tut on how to design one.

Wow... just wow.

pokemon xd said:
Another thing about the celebi sprite it's green for the front and red for the back what?

It's for spriting, idiot. The back is the shiny, and the front is the normal.

pokemon xd said:
I'm a little harsh

Little?!?!

Is this a little harsh?

pokemon xd said:
if you can even get a alpha out

Point proven. Oh yeah, almost forgot to give ageangel for his awesome banner. Give him credit and a cookie.

Ray Maverick · May 20, 2009

Wowy there.Aren't you a little rude?

It's for spriting, idiot. The back is the shiny, and the front is the normal.

I understand that they're harsh,and they didn't point out things with the right way.
But they are right with what they are saying.Really,do you think the celebi evo sprite will be smashing? :\
You need to work more on the story.

Sweet Jasmine · May 20, 2009

I Really dont like the Fakemon Legendary
It's Fat >3 Could you make it a little
more Cuter? Well Nice Work *giggles*

-Yasumin >3

notbob · May 20, 2009

Yasumin said:
I Really dont like the Fakemon Legendary
It's Fat >3 Could you make it a little
more Cuter? Well Nice Work *giggles*

-Yasumin >3

Well, it's meant to be muscular, as it is part fighting type.

Ray Maverick said:
Wowy there.Aren't you a little rude?

I understand that they're harsh,and they didn't point out things with the right way.
But they are right with what they are saying.Really,do you think the celebi evo sprite will be smashing? :\
You need to work more on the story.

Why does the story need work and what is wrong with my sprite?

Ray Maverick · May 20, 2009

What is wrong with your sprite?Its too fat,and it looks like alien. :\
No cute,as Yasumin said before.

The story....lets say its not exciting.

Mana1 · May 20, 2009

I'm no spriter, but this is what is wrong:
-Scratchy black lines
-Missing any signs of a mouth
-Its head is profile rather than just looking slightly left
-Its arms look like fins
-Its feet... look like random boxes you rushed in.
-Its colouring is identical to Celebi's, and yet still looks uterly wrong (except the blue bits, which are wrongly places anyway)
Suggest: Getting a spriter, searching for Celebi evolutions that have been previously made and asking the spriter if you can use it.

Whats wrong with the story?
-You STILL havent added in the line I told you was missing, so it doesn't make sense.
-The story doesn't actually kick in until the final tournament, which I am going to assume is far into the game. Don't you think thats a bit boring?
Suggest: Fix the above.

Whats wrong with the maps?
-Far too much long grass
-The colour pallette just looks wrong, like how bright the grass is compared to the trees.
-Fence has random gaps and so serves little purpose except to fill in space.
-I see no bushes, and I like bushes.
Suggest: Don't feel the need to make large maps, make them small if you want. On large maps make a defined path that twists around and make sure its not so repetitive.

Sweet Jasmine · May 20, 2009

Yeah I Wish Someone would edit it? and the Story could you make it a little bit
Adventurous? xD *thinking seriously* No Offense huh okies? ^_^
Good luck on it. and also you said it's muscular right? it's look like not >3
You should make it a little cuter or scarier rightie? hihi Just some guss =3
*winks*

-Yasumin >3 Your Sweet Friend ^_^

notbob · May 20, 2009

SwiftSign said:
I'm no spriter, but this is what is wrong:
-Scratchy black lines
-Missing any signs of a mouth
-Its head is profile rather than just looking slightly left
-Its arms look like fins
-Its feet... look like random boxes you rushed in.
-Its colouring is identical to Celebi's, and yet still looks uterly wrong (except the blue bits, which are wrongly places anyway)
Suggest: Getting a spriter, searching for Celebi evolutions that have been previously made and asking the spriter if you can use it.

Whats wrong with the story?
-You STILL havent added in the line I told you was missing, so it doesn't make sense.
-The story doesn't actually kick in until the final tournament, which I am going to assume is far into the game. Don't you think thats a bit boring?
Suggest: Fix the above.

Whats wrong with the maps?
-Far too much long grass
-The colour pallette just looks wrong, like how bright the grass is compared to the trees.
-Fence has random gaps and so serves little purpose except to fill in space.
-I see no bushes, and I like bushes.
Suggest: Don't feel the need to make large maps, make them small if you want. On large maps make a defined path that twists around and make sure its not so repetitive.

The Map and story is fixed, the sprite is improved.

Conan Edogawa · May 20, 2009

Did you put the new sprite up? I suggest looking at Chesu's tutorials in the pixel art section and using them to create your legendary. I'm not trying to sound rude but it isn't that good. It still has the problems others have pointed out and looks flat. So I think you should redo it completely and use the tutorials.

notbob · May 20, 2009

Here's the new sprite.

machomuu · May 22, 2009

notbob said:
Here's the new sprite.

...I think you need a spriter...on normal occasions, I would be nice and say "it could use some work" or "it's not that great", but in this case, I'm going to say it is very bad, I'm sorry, but there's no nice way to say it.
Why does Celebi have an evolved form anyway, and why is it a fighting type? There's no reason Celebi would evolve, and give a reason that it's a fighting type.

notbob · May 22, 2009

machomuu said:
...I think you need a spriter...on normal occasions, I would be nice and say "it could use some work" or "it's not that great", but in this case, I'm going to say it is very bad, I'm sorry, but there's no nice way to say it.
Why does Celebi have an evolved form anyway, and why is it a fighting type? There's no reason Celebi would evolve, and give a reason that it's a fighting type.

Well, first off, I think it would be nice if Celebi evolved to be an extremely strong Pokemon. Second off, since it's fighting type, it will have powerful attacks based on using its strength. Lastly, it would be nice to have a spriter, would you like to be one?

PaulH · May 22, 2009

What might be an idea is to study poses of various pokemon, and do slight edits of those. To give yourself alittle more skill in positioning, angle and so forth for your Celebii evolution.

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