Ruby hack: Pokemon Jade Version

Info:


Story:
Your a 15 year old child ever since your were 8 you adored pokémon
Your favourate pokémon was a phanpy. Your father, DUKE, became the champion of the itzsu region when he was 28. when he became champion
he never returned home.your mother was devastated.Most children get there pokémon at the age of 10.But your mother wanted to wait till you were mature.Now two months after your birthday your neighbor Prof.MASON
is glad to help ...

Media:
Screenshots:



Videos

YT: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6aXpAqxeP5Y

RTH: http://romhacktube.com/video/6AWS7A6...n-Jade-Trailer

*Cant put the cid staright on to PC i dont know how to do youtube tags :/*

The offical August 2010 Pokemon Jade trailer ;)




Features:
*A brand new Itzsu Region
*Battle Kris Gold Silver Red and Blue
*Visit 1,2,&3 Island (Newly improved)
*Battle tower
*Rise of team live ;D
*Battle the emtionally Disturbed Rival Ronald
*Collect the 8 dark coins and enter the dark catacombs

Gym guide:
1st gym - POISON type


Credits:~
Me , Overworld(Not shown yet) , Mapping , Story plotting
Banjora Marxvile , Critism
Shiny quasgire , Music hacker
Mr Kurus ~ , Music hacker

Progress till beta 1



Downloads :)
None yet :(

Thanks for listening

"One must acknowledge one's defeat before he can move on ...
... I will go solo for now ... So that on day i will form a stronger
organization!
Putting together the potential of many is how you produce a huge power ...
Thats what a organization is
That's the strength of an organization...
But! I failed... to make the best use of my subordinates' potential...!
But you shall witness one day the revival of me and my Team ROcket!
........ One Day you will understand ......."
-6 years later-
... Its been 3 years since any thing bad has been reported ...
No team rocket ... No muggings...Robbing...Nothing
Life is perfect as they would say ... We found the perfect power source
to fuel our region -Itszu- and More pokemon have been discovered
But today i am 15 and i get my first pokemon ... I can't wait
I am destined to become the Newest Pokemon Master
I will beat the bigshots like Red Gold and Brendan

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That's the old story. Itzsu Region Sage remade, eh? You mapping skills did approve, also. So that's a good thing. Good luck on this.

I would make that lake in the first town smaller. Too much empty space. If you make a good tileset this could be a great hack

Destiny Demon said:

That's the old story. Itzsu Region Sage remade, eh? You mapping skills did approve, also. So that's a good thing. Good luck on this.

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Yeah the old story was mostly Giovanni's speech to silver
i may use that as a prologue :)

jodonel said:

I would make that lake in the first town smaller. Too much empty space. If you make a good tileset this could be a great hack

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Yeah the first town failed
i will re-map it i was mostly concentrating on Dersen City (Town 2)

the mapping isn't very good but some later maps seem to have improved.
also the headbutt tree is...horrible.
so far the scripting just looks reused from firered but you've only dhowed one script so idk.
tile errors I found circled in attachment

the town looks WAY to big

I like your Ideas, BUT The 1st Gym pokemon should be changed. Maybe:
Youngster Pete
Pkmn 1 : Grimer lvl 10
Pkmn 2 : Nidoran (M) lvl 11
Leader Faze
Pkmn 1: Koffing lvl 12
Pkmn 2 : Nidorino lvl 14

imevil said:

the town looks WAY to big

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Super Ultra Mega Charizard said:

the mapping isn't very good but some later maps seem to have improved.
also the headbutt tree is...horrible.
so far the scripting just looks reused from firered but you've only dhowed one script so idk.
tile errors I found circled in attachment

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The fence behind the Lab was a accident
The grass at the side will be change
as will the tree at the bottom
And i dont see anything wrong with the house???

Pearlone said:

I like your Ideas, BUT The 1st Gym pokemon should be changed. Maybe:
Youngster Pete
Pkmn 1 : Grimer lvl 10
Pkmn 2 : Nidoran (M) lvl 11
Leader Faze
Pkmn 1: Koffing lvl 12
Pkmn 2 : Nidorino lvl 14

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Aww Coool
I'll umm maybe use that :D ta (Will give credit)
~-Let the credit givin commence-~

the house has no door. houses have doors.

Super Ultra Mega Charizard said:

the house has no door. houses have doors.

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not all of them do on pokemon

and
~~Update~~



A little gift for you all since its my b-day
but im not showin where you get it

spelspelen said:

Hi, I have a little question about posting a new threat.
Always if I click submit to submit my threat then it doesn't appear in the forums. Can you please help me??

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Um.. ask a Mod or a Admin :L

Banjora Marxvile said:

Probably not where you get it, but "Met in Dersen Lab" hints where you get it, if it is telling the truth. Which I hope it is. If not, then you sir are a liar.

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Yes But there will be many People in Dersen Lab
Since it has a school too :P

:..:~UPDATE~:..:
New Trees and Grass and New hero OW

Dersen City updates

Genecide Carverns

Dunseberg City:

Looks cool Samface, just one thing, if u r gonna change the name, pllllllllz dont call it Topaz Version, go with Jade Version. Also, that cave map looks pretty good, your mapping is definately improving.

Nintendork15 said:

Dersen City updates

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That path is a real eye-sore. Try softening the colours a little? Remember that the paths etc. are the background, so shouldn't stand out so much unless they need to.

Nintendork15 said:

Genecide Carverns

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If I'm right in assuming the 'e' is a typo, then... why are you calling a cave Genocide Cavern? And, more to the point, why would people be in this place? ...seriously...

Nintendork15 said:

Dunseberg City:

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I dunno about everyone but I don't think I would announce that I'm an emo in big bold letters on a signpost (in a hypothetical world). Also, is Marble really a name (read: don't bombard me with 'is brock a real name' or something. not everything game freak does is correct)?

This story is... well, it could be presented in a more organised manner. The overuse of elipses makes it unnatractive to read, and doesn't read how I assume you want it to read (which isn't like: "Hello." five second pause. "My name is John.").

Good luck.

Looks cool Samface, just one thing, if u r gonna change the name, pllllllllz dont call it Topaz Version, go with Jade Version. Also, that cave map looks pretty good, your mapping is definately improving.

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Yes I may go with Jade version :P

That path is a real eye-sore. Try softening the colours a little? Remember that the paths etc. are the background, so shouldn't stand out so much unless they need to.

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Hmm... I dont see much wrong with it
But over time i may make it blend in with the house tiles.

If I'm right in assuming the 'e' is a typo, then... why are you calling a cave Genocide Cavern? And, more to the point, why would people be in this place? ...seriously...

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It's named "Genocide Caverns" because
200,000 years ago ... a powerful tribe entered the Cavern in search for
an Magical Power ... A certain species of Pokémon Protected this "power"
The tribe Wiped out the Pokémon In result means they committed Genocide

(The species that were wiped will be obtainable deep within the Caverns :) )

I dunno about everyone but I don't think I would announce that I'm an emo in big bold letters on a signpost (in a hypothetical world). Also, is Marble really a name (read: don't bombard me with 'is brock a real name' or something. not everything game freak does is correct)?

This story is... well, it could be presented in a more organised manner. The overuse of elipses makes it unnatractive to read, and doesn't read how I assume you want it to read (which isn't like: "Hello." five second pause. "My name is John.").

Good luck.

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I see Your Point with the Name part That is the default name
Since the first gym was going to be a ground gym
I changed it to poison though :P

As for the emo part ... Why not ?

Because 'emo' is an insultive term?

Either way, why would someone go excavating in a cave called Genocide? Surely they'd be put off.

Anyway, idk, go ahead.