DGexe
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- Seen Sep 2, 2010
*has a question she'd like answered, if possible...*
So I'm trying to rewrite this Pokémon/Hellsing (crowd: GASP!) fanfic I have called Depth Perception, but I have a wee-little-itty-bitty issue...
I'm not entirely sure how to go about write it. Wait, wait, I'll not be so vauge: you see, I decided that in this revised version, I'd attempt to write it from an omnipresent (-potent? -scient?) perspective of Arceus as he observes one of his more human subordinates during her and her Pokémon team's intermingling with the Iscariot Division, XIII. That means that, while He can and more than likely will comment on what is going on within the main body of the story, He won't be directly interfering except for the occasional avatar-based "drop in"s on this particular subordinate of His.
I know how to write in 1st and 3rd by themselves, for sure, but I've never mixed the two before, so... does anyone have any writing tips they'd like to share for my writting's sake so I don't confuse the heck out of my readers? *has seen many a mixing of perspectives gone totally awry...*
And apologies if this isn't really an "answerable" question; I'm just a wee bit... what's the word... ? Ah, intimidated I suppose by my own attempts at branching out and thus... well, as I think I said, not sure how to execute this rewrite. Frankly, I read a lot of books (and decent fanfics) in my spare time, and I've never seen anyone mix two perspectives like I have in mind...
So I'm trying to rewrite this Pokémon/Hellsing (crowd: GASP!) fanfic I have called Depth Perception, but I have a wee-little-itty-bitty issue...
I'm not entirely sure how to go about write it. Wait, wait, I'll not be so vauge: you see, I decided that in this revised version, I'd attempt to write it from an omnipresent (-potent? -scient?) perspective of Arceus as he observes one of his more human subordinates during her and her Pokémon team's intermingling with the Iscariot Division, XIII. That means that, while He can and more than likely will comment on what is going on within the main body of the story, He won't be directly interfering except for the occasional avatar-based "drop in"s on this particular subordinate of His.
I know how to write in 1st and 3rd by themselves, for sure, but I've never mixed the two before, so... does anyone have any writing tips they'd like to share for my writting's sake so I don't confuse the heck out of my readers? *has seen many a mixing of perspectives gone totally awry...*
And apologies if this isn't really an "answerable" question; I'm just a wee bit... what's the word... ? Ah, intimidated I suppose by my own attempts at branching out and thus... well, as I think I said, not sure how to execute this rewrite. Frankly, I read a lot of books (and decent fanfics) in my spare time, and I've never seen anyone mix two perspectives like I have in mind...