Shrike Flamestar
The Invisible!
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Pfff, I should have known that no one would read my long post. Bay! Astinus! Where are you, you read my last long post!
NO CAKE FOR ANYONE! BAH!
And it was a beautiful cake too.
So I just finished the initial draft of TRINITY chapter 5 and good fraking lord does it have a ton of dialogue. It's one of those chapters that I need to both introduce a lot of new stuff and tie all of it into old stuff that needs to be recapped to an extent before I move on with the plot, so...yeah. It doesn't help that a good part of the chapter is of two new characters questioning Tashima about what the hell went on up to that point, and then going on to explain their plan for the future.
What's terrible is that the next chapter may also end up with loads of dialogue as it'll probably be focused on developing the three new characters I introduced with this chapter further. Arrow, Ava, and Kyle... Be glad I changed Kyle's name from what it used to be: Andy. I think I may have mentioned in here before that I was introducing an androgynous new character soon. Well, that would be Arrow. And he's just crazy it turns out. And a Ditto. Yeah, I don't think you see those in fanfics too much.
So... TRINITY chapter 5. Expect it this weekend, all few of you who actually read it (Yes, I'm looking at you Typhlosion/random Japanese garble). You'd think winning the SWC would do more for my popularity. <_<
What does it take to be popular here?! ;_;
When it comes to your writing, is there anything you do that annoys you? Like a pet peeve?
Long chapters with loads of dialogue. Yet I can't stop doing them, especially around the beginning of a fic. ;_;
Describing forests and generic interior environments also annoy me. True, I can get pretty fancy with describing forests, but the problem is that they're all the same! I can only talk about the birds hopping between branches overhead as a soft breeze rustles the bright green leaves so many times before I go crazy. Same for generic interior environments. Namely, hallways. Good god I hate hallways. You think by now I would just stop designing my interior environments with so many hallways but the truth is that buildings do have tons of hallways! What do you expect me to do?!
How intelligent do you see Pokémon as being?
On the same level of humans for the most part, being fully sentient, sapient, and self-aware. Some are perhaps less so than others, but all Pokemon regardless of IQ are self-aware at least.
I don't get how you people can write about Pokemon as being mere animals. You say that's how they are in the games, but there's nothing really that proves that. The games are far too limited to show one way or the other, so saying their animals is just your own view.
I've never gotten the whole concept of "game canon"... The only game canon really is the plot, and perhaps the battle system and stats. Everything else is far too ambiguous to really use without expanding on it, in which case you're getting outside of canon anyway. Why would you want to describe them as animals anyway? :( It's just...cold. You're removing an entire set of characters from your fic. Even if you can't understand the Pokemon, simply having them as sentient and intelligent means that their actions would give them character. As animals, they're just...robots, programmed to act according to their basic desires and a sense of self-preservation. It's sort of like, why even write Pokemon if you just use them as tools...
The people here who actually know me well (probably just Astinus) may understand why I get so worked up about this. :S
The game certainly doesn't even imply that they brainwash the Pokemon; the only place that really happens is within Colosseum and XD with the Shadow Pokemon, in which it's a rather evil thing that it's your ultimate goal to cure the Pokemon of. I don't think Nintendo would ever imply that such an evil concept is good and accepted within the context of a kid's series.
Really, you think too much like Silver. :S Pokemon aren't just tools, man! They deserve to be loved! The power of love can conquer all! Except Ixodida in Val's Anime Ex Machina. Because they're badass aliens. Who, might I add, also have a tendency to brainwash their hosts it seems. Except Adam, because he's weird and mysterious and I'm sure in no way a Biblical allegory.
Why do Pokemon obey their trainers, especially if they know they are going to loose or get hurt?
The biggest thing in TFC is pretty much loyalty. Keep in mind, though, that in TFC you can't just walk into the nearest field and expect to catch a Pokemon, or even run into one at all. Starters have that bond with their trainer of course and follow them because they're friends, but with other Pokemon it's mostly because they have a sense of loyalty or other sort of bond to the trainer. Take Jehiel, he feels loyal to Shrike since Shrike managed to beat and capture him. Since Jehiel prizes strength, he feels obligated to follow someone stronger than himself. Then there's Ramiel, who's loyal to Shrike because he saves him from being killed. Matariel is loyal to Rayne because of the bond and connection they have, which I can't get into too much. Fury for Aira is pretty much the same as Ramiel for Shrike, in that she saved him.
Each Pokemon generally has their own reason for following their trainer, which can range from a simple friendship to not even following them at all and vehemently refusing to obey their orders (which is in canon too. See: Charizard)
NO CAKE FOR ANYONE! BAH!
And it was a beautiful cake too.
So I just finished the initial draft of TRINITY chapter 5 and good fraking lord does it have a ton of dialogue. It's one of those chapters that I need to both introduce a lot of new stuff and tie all of it into old stuff that needs to be recapped to an extent before I move on with the plot, so...yeah. It doesn't help that a good part of the chapter is of two new characters questioning Tashima about what the hell went on up to that point, and then going on to explain their plan for the future.
What's terrible is that the next chapter may also end up with loads of dialogue as it'll probably be focused on developing the three new characters I introduced with this chapter further. Arrow, Ava, and Kyle... Be glad I changed Kyle's name from what it used to be: Andy. I think I may have mentioned in here before that I was introducing an androgynous new character soon. Well, that would be Arrow. And he's just crazy it turns out. And a Ditto. Yeah, I don't think you see those in fanfics too much.
So... TRINITY chapter 5. Expect it this weekend, all few of you who actually read it (Yes, I'm looking at you Typhlosion/random Japanese garble). You'd think winning the SWC would do more for my popularity. <_<
What does it take to be popular here?! ;_;
When it comes to your writing, is there anything you do that annoys you? Like a pet peeve?
Long chapters with loads of dialogue. Yet I can't stop doing them, especially around the beginning of a fic. ;_;
Describing forests and generic interior environments also annoy me. True, I can get pretty fancy with describing forests, but the problem is that they're all the same! I can only talk about the birds hopping between branches overhead as a soft breeze rustles the bright green leaves so many times before I go crazy. Same for generic interior environments. Namely, hallways. Good god I hate hallways. You think by now I would just stop designing my interior environments with so many hallways but the truth is that buildings do have tons of hallways! What do you expect me to do?!
How intelligent do you see Pokémon as being?
On the same level of humans for the most part, being fully sentient, sapient, and self-aware. Some are perhaps less so than others, but all Pokemon regardless of IQ are self-aware at least.
I don't get how you people can write about Pokemon as being mere animals. You say that's how they are in the games, but there's nothing really that proves that. The games are far too limited to show one way or the other, so saying their animals is just your own view.
I've never gotten the whole concept of "game canon"... The only game canon really is the plot, and perhaps the battle system and stats. Everything else is far too ambiguous to really use without expanding on it, in which case you're getting outside of canon anyway. Why would you want to describe them as animals anyway? :( It's just...cold. You're removing an entire set of characters from your fic. Even if you can't understand the Pokemon, simply having them as sentient and intelligent means that their actions would give them character. As animals, they're just...robots, programmed to act according to their basic desires and a sense of self-preservation. It's sort of like, why even write Pokemon if you just use them as tools...
The people here who actually know me well (probably just Astinus) may understand why I get so worked up about this. :S
No they don't. Badges are merely a sign that a trainer has a certain level of competence, and so Pokemon which don't know the trainer so well (traded Pokemon) can trust that the trainer know what they're doing and is worth listening to. Note that Pokemon you caught don't care how many badges you have, they trust you because they know you well so they don't need any fancy proof that you're good.Redstar said:As stated in the games and used in the manga, gym badges are talismans that basically put pressure on or even brainwash Pokemon.
The game certainly doesn't even imply that they brainwash the Pokemon; the only place that really happens is within Colosseum and XD with the Shadow Pokemon, in which it's a rather evil thing that it's your ultimate goal to cure the Pokemon of. I don't think Nintendo would ever imply that such an evil concept is good and accepted within the context of a kid's series.
Really, you think too much like Silver. :S Pokemon aren't just tools, man! They deserve to be loved! The power of love can conquer all! Except Ixodida in Val's Anime Ex Machina. Because they're badass aliens. Who, might I add, also have a tendency to brainwash their hosts it seems. Except Adam, because he's weird and mysterious and I'm sure in no way a Biblical allegory.
Why do Pokemon obey their trainers, especially if they know they are going to loose or get hurt?
The biggest thing in TFC is pretty much loyalty. Keep in mind, though, that in TFC you can't just walk into the nearest field and expect to catch a Pokemon, or even run into one at all. Starters have that bond with their trainer of course and follow them because they're friends, but with other Pokemon it's mostly because they have a sense of loyalty or other sort of bond to the trainer. Take Jehiel, he feels loyal to Shrike since Shrike managed to beat and capture him. Since Jehiel prizes strength, he feels obligated to follow someone stronger than himself. Then there's Ramiel, who's loyal to Shrike because he saves him from being killed. Matariel is loyal to Rayne because of the bond and connection they have, which I can't get into too much. Fury for Aira is pretty much the same as Ramiel for Shrike, in that she saved him.
Each Pokemon generally has their own reason for following their trainer, which can range from a simple friendship to not even following them at all and vehemently refusing to obey their orders (which is in canon too. See: Charizard)