Alana
I still love this world...
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Ok this is my second fan fic. The first one didn't go over so well but I hope this one will be better. Ok I'm gonna start off with the Prologue then I'll post the first chapter. Tell me what ya think.
I took off the prologue cause I thought maybe everybody thought the it sadi everything.
Chapter 1: Tragedy
?Come on Blaze!? Called the young trainer as she sprinted down the hill. Blaze ,a Vulpix, bounded happily after her. As the girl reached the bottom she tripped and tumbled end over end before landing sprawled at the bottom of the hill. She sat up and brushed her long navy hair out of her brilliant gold eyes. She looked around and saw Blaze leap high into the air. The girl held out her arms and caught her little fox friend before she hit the ground. They both laughed and the girl tossed her Vulpix into the air again before setting her down gently on the grass. They both laid there for a while catching their breath and watching the clouds roll by. Finally the girl spoke. ?Guess we should get moving.?
Blaze nodded. ?You?re right.? She replied in Pokemon tongue. The girl seemed to understand though. She got up and allowed Blaze to jump to her shoulder then to her head. She smiled and walked back up the hill. They walked for a few minutes before arriving in a small town. It had that old timey look about it. The girl straitened her navy tunic before entering one of the houses. Inside the house was dark and musty.
The girl lit an oil lamp and called, ?Mother I?m home.? There was no answer. ?That?s odd. Mother is always home by this time.? She shrugged and deposited Blaze on the floor before walking into another room and sitting down on a soft bed. She pulled off her boots and gauntlets then her belt and dagger. It was late and she should have already been in bed but she had lost track of time outside. She yawned and laid back down on the bed. Blaze jumped up beside her. Without even removing her head band or the fire stone around her neck the girl fell asleep.
?Akira. Akira wake up.? The girl stirred. She opened her eyes and saw old man Vesquaz standing there. He looked worried.
Akira sat up and asked, ?Mr. Vesquaz what?s wrong??
?I am afraid your mother is very ill. We found her early this morning out side the chapel.?
Akira leapt up. She pulled on her boots, gauntlets, belt, and dagger then hurried out of the house. Mr. Vesquaz and Blaze followed. It didn?t take long for Akira and Blaze to reach the chapel. Mr. Vesquaz took a little longer though. A group of people were already there. Most of the village from what Akira could see. She pushed her way through them and bent down beside a woman lying on the ground. Everything became quiet. The woman?s eyes were closed and her breathing was shallow. Her beautiful brown dress was damp with sweat. When Akira touched her face the woman opened her eyes. They were a rich green but their color was faded and her eyes were glazed.
?Mother?? Whispered Akira. Blaze whined. The woman looked at her.
?Akira?? She gasped. ?Akira I?m so sorry. I should have told you earlier but I didn?t want you to worry.?
?What do you mean??
Her mother smiled sadly. ?Akira I have been sick for a long time now. I knew my time was short and I didn?t want you to worry.?
There were tears in Akira?s eyes when she replied. ?Mother don?t talk like that. You?ll get better. No sickness has ever beaten you before.?
?Yes I know but...? Her mother coughed violently then said. ?Listen I want you to go on an adventure. Have fun and live life. Take Blaze with you. I want you to be happy. I don?t want you to mope around and feel sorry. I don?t want you to experience the pain of grief.?
Tears streamed down Akira?s face as watched her mother?s eyes glazed and became dull. ?Mother.? There was no reply. ?Mother please wake up. Don?t leave me. Please.? Still there was no reply. Blaze nudged the woman and felt her skin grow cold. She whined again and stepped back. Akira stood up. Before anyone could stop her she had grabbed Blaze and taken off. Outside the village Blaze jumped out of Akira?s arms and ran beside her. They ran and ran. Akira didn?t know where she was going but she didn?t care. All that mattered now was that she got as far away from the village as she could. Maybe if she just kept running she could leave it all behind. Maybe if she just kept moving all the pain would just go away. Eventually they found them selves deep in a forest full of berries and other kinds of fruit. But neither of them was hungry. Akira collapsed from exhaustion. She sat down with her back against a tree and closed her eyes. Blaze laid down beside her. After a few minutes both of them had drifted off to sleep.
I took off the prologue cause I thought maybe everybody thought the it sadi everything.
Chapter 1: Tragedy
?Come on Blaze!? Called the young trainer as she sprinted down the hill. Blaze ,a Vulpix, bounded happily after her. As the girl reached the bottom she tripped and tumbled end over end before landing sprawled at the bottom of the hill. She sat up and brushed her long navy hair out of her brilliant gold eyes. She looked around and saw Blaze leap high into the air. The girl held out her arms and caught her little fox friend before she hit the ground. They both laughed and the girl tossed her Vulpix into the air again before setting her down gently on the grass. They both laid there for a while catching their breath and watching the clouds roll by. Finally the girl spoke. ?Guess we should get moving.?
Blaze nodded. ?You?re right.? She replied in Pokemon tongue. The girl seemed to understand though. She got up and allowed Blaze to jump to her shoulder then to her head. She smiled and walked back up the hill. They walked for a few minutes before arriving in a small town. It had that old timey look about it. The girl straitened her navy tunic before entering one of the houses. Inside the house was dark and musty.
The girl lit an oil lamp and called, ?Mother I?m home.? There was no answer. ?That?s odd. Mother is always home by this time.? She shrugged and deposited Blaze on the floor before walking into another room and sitting down on a soft bed. She pulled off her boots and gauntlets then her belt and dagger. It was late and she should have already been in bed but she had lost track of time outside. She yawned and laid back down on the bed. Blaze jumped up beside her. Without even removing her head band or the fire stone around her neck the girl fell asleep.
?Akira. Akira wake up.? The girl stirred. She opened her eyes and saw old man Vesquaz standing there. He looked worried.
Akira sat up and asked, ?Mr. Vesquaz what?s wrong??
?I am afraid your mother is very ill. We found her early this morning out side the chapel.?
Akira leapt up. She pulled on her boots, gauntlets, belt, and dagger then hurried out of the house. Mr. Vesquaz and Blaze followed. It didn?t take long for Akira and Blaze to reach the chapel. Mr. Vesquaz took a little longer though. A group of people were already there. Most of the village from what Akira could see. She pushed her way through them and bent down beside a woman lying on the ground. Everything became quiet. The woman?s eyes were closed and her breathing was shallow. Her beautiful brown dress was damp with sweat. When Akira touched her face the woman opened her eyes. They were a rich green but their color was faded and her eyes were glazed.
?Mother?? Whispered Akira. Blaze whined. The woman looked at her.
?Akira?? She gasped. ?Akira I?m so sorry. I should have told you earlier but I didn?t want you to worry.?
?What do you mean??
Her mother smiled sadly. ?Akira I have been sick for a long time now. I knew my time was short and I didn?t want you to worry.?
There were tears in Akira?s eyes when she replied. ?Mother don?t talk like that. You?ll get better. No sickness has ever beaten you before.?
?Yes I know but...? Her mother coughed violently then said. ?Listen I want you to go on an adventure. Have fun and live life. Take Blaze with you. I want you to be happy. I don?t want you to mope around and feel sorry. I don?t want you to experience the pain of grief.?
Tears streamed down Akira?s face as watched her mother?s eyes glazed and became dull. ?Mother.? There was no reply. ?Mother please wake up. Don?t leave me. Please.? Still there was no reply. Blaze nudged the woman and felt her skin grow cold. She whined again and stepped back. Akira stood up. Before anyone could stop her she had grabbed Blaze and taken off. Outside the village Blaze jumped out of Akira?s arms and ran beside her. They ran and ran. Akira didn?t know where she was going but she didn?t care. All that mattered now was that she got as far away from the village as she could. Maybe if she just kept running she could leave it all behind. Maybe if she just kept moving all the pain would just go away. Eventually they found them selves deep in a forest full of berries and other kinds of fruit. But neither of them was hungry. Akira collapsed from exhaustion. She sat down with her back against a tree and closed her eyes. Blaze laid down beside her. After a few minutes both of them had drifted off to sleep.
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