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- I am the darkness inside the souls of kings. I am
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Note: This is of a hack I scrapped as I didn't have time to finish, I also have altered the story since the first time it was released so if it seems different... It is :D
Also, there are two main characters so if they split up, we will have a chapter 2 (DUSTIN) and a chapter 2 (JAKE)
Chapter 1: Pokemon I chose you!
In the quaint seaside village of Mavra town, two 14 year old boys exitedly head into the pokemon research laboratory. Inside an elderly gentleman with Brown hair and Green hair greeted the boys.
"Jake, Dustin, about time you got here, the pokemon are getting restless." calmly remarked the man. "Sorry Professor Spruce, there were some wild Tailow being chased by a Rattata..." Replied the Blonde haired, blue eyed boy the man had referred to as Dustin. "Well now, no harm is done, Why don't we go ahead and go see the pokemon." The boys eagerly followed the professor to a small table.
On the table were three pokeballs, containing the starter pokemon for the new trainers in the Olmas region, There was Treeko the grass reptile, Totodile the water alligator, and Charmander the fire lizard. Thinking for a moment, Jake grabbed the first pokeball smiling happily as he did so.
"Charmander!, I choose you!" The green eyed, black haired Jake Hollered. "Totodile!, I choose you" yelled Dustin. "Well, that decides it..." Began professor Spruce "You now each are trainers, Here are your trainer cards and pokedexs." The boys accepted the gifts and looked the other in the eyes. "Dustin, I challenge you to a pokemon battle!" Challenged Jake. "I gladly accept your challenge Jake, Prepare to get all washed up!" Punned Dustin as he threw out Totodile. "Well, its a red hot Rival battle now!" added Jake as he threw Charmanders pokeball.
Charmander glanced at its trainer and smiled and noticed Totodile, which its Grin grew even more as it noticed the totodile was its opponent. "Charmander, use ember!" Commanded Jake "Erm Jake, Ember is a fire type move, which isn't very effective against water type pokemon." Sighed Professor Spruce. "Totodile, use water gun!" Called Dustin. The powerful stream of water quenched the flames and smacked the Charmander dead in the face, with so much force that it was launched against the wall scattering posters. "Charmander! Get up, shake it off and use Scratch!" Prayed Jake. The fire pokemon was weak, but managed to get off the ground and launch itself at the totodile... Which sidestepped as the Charmander crashed into the table which had once held their pokeballs. The final pokeball bounced off the table and released Treeko, who jumped onto professor Spruce and angrily shook its fists at the two trainers for being Reckless.
"Sorry little guy, Guess we got carried away" Apologized Dustin. "Say, you boys both seem to be rather good trainers... why don't you take the Pokemon league challenge." Mused Professor Spruce. "I already planned it!" Boasted Jake, "I know all of the Olmas regions gyms by heart!" "Well then you should know that Solam city, home to the Solam city gym leader Nigel is the closest gym from Mavra town" said professor Spruce. "The Nigel? The guy from those commercials on TV?" Asked Dustin
"Indeed" said Professor Spruce. "Well then, I am going there first!" Claimed Jake as he ran out the lab. "Well, professor Spruce, thank you for the pokemon... Now I must make my exit and start my adventure" Remarked Dustin as he also ran out of the lab. The professor looked at the Treeko that had been sitting on his shoulder. He smiled and began to pick up the mess that had been created during the battle.
Chapter 2 (DUSTIN): Enter team skull!
Dustin and Jake had gone there seperate ways and now Dustin walked down the forested paths of route 1 watching pokemon run around. He had been training Totodile on the wild pokemon of Route 1 when he heard a voice come from the woods on the edge of the path.
"Hey kid, what is a weakling like you doing with a pokemon? Is that old coot still giving away pokemon to weak trainers?" Sneered the mystery voice. "Who are you and I'll have you know I'm not weak." Replied Dustin bravely. "Oh? Is that so... Well then" Began the mystery voice as it stepped out from the shadows. It was a man wearing a dark purple suit with a large white Skull in the center. "The only way to prove that is a pokemon battle!" He yelled as he threw out a pokeball which contained a Stunky. "Totodile, lets show this punk who the weak one really is!" Remarked Dustin.
"Stunky, use scratch!" Ordered the mystery trainer. "Totodile, water gun!" Yelled Dustin. The skunk pokemon jumped forward with its claw at the ready, while Totodile waited for the perfect moment to blast a jet of water out of its mouth, knocking the Stunky away with ease. "Ha! You is that all you've got? You're all talk and no show!" Laughed Dustin. Then strangely the skunk pokemon began to glow with a bright white light. "Oh thats not fair." sighed Dustin as the Stunky evolved into Skuntank. "Alright! Skuntank, use Poison gas!" said the mystery trainer. "Totodile! Water gun quickly!" Begged Dustin. The Skuntank prepared itself to release posion gas, and was suddenly blasted by a stream of water fainting it.
"Alright kid, you win, but I am only a grunt in the bigger operations of team skull. Believe me, we will be back." Grunted the man as he healed his Skuntank. "Hold it right there!" Yelled a female voice. Dustin turned to notice Officer Jenny standing there. "You are under arrest for robbery, theft, and wearing that horrid looking outfit!" She said. "You will not catch me! Skuntank use smokescreen!" The man yelled. A thick black smoke soon covered the entire path of route 1. When it cleared, the man had vanished.
"Sorry I took so long, Its not exactly a top priority to check on rumors of suspicious characters, but turns out this one was true. Just too bad we couldn't apprehend the culprit. Oh! Your not hurt or anything are you?" Said Officer Jenny. "No, I think we are okay, right Totodile?" replied Totodile. "To...ta..." breathed Totodile. "Oh no! That must be skuntanks poison gas attack mixed with its aftermath ability. You better come with me, I can escort you to the Solam city pokemon center!"
Also, there are two main characters so if they split up, we will have a chapter 2 (DUSTIN) and a chapter 2 (JAKE)
Chapter 1: Pokemon I chose you!
Spoiler:
In the quaint seaside village of Mavra town, two 14 year old boys exitedly head into the pokemon research laboratory. Inside an elderly gentleman with Brown hair and Green hair greeted the boys.
"Jake, Dustin, about time you got here, the pokemon are getting restless." calmly remarked the man. "Sorry Professor Spruce, there were some wild Tailow being chased by a Rattata..." Replied the Blonde haired, blue eyed boy the man had referred to as Dustin. "Well now, no harm is done, Why don't we go ahead and go see the pokemon." The boys eagerly followed the professor to a small table.
On the table were three pokeballs, containing the starter pokemon for the new trainers in the Olmas region, There was Treeko the grass reptile, Totodile the water alligator, and Charmander the fire lizard. Thinking for a moment, Jake grabbed the first pokeball smiling happily as he did so.
"Charmander!, I choose you!" The green eyed, black haired Jake Hollered. "Totodile!, I choose you" yelled Dustin. "Well, that decides it..." Began professor Spruce "You now each are trainers, Here are your trainer cards and pokedexs." The boys accepted the gifts and looked the other in the eyes. "Dustin, I challenge you to a pokemon battle!" Challenged Jake. "I gladly accept your challenge Jake, Prepare to get all washed up!" Punned Dustin as he threw out Totodile. "Well, its a red hot Rival battle now!" added Jake as he threw Charmanders pokeball.
Charmander glanced at its trainer and smiled and noticed Totodile, which its Grin grew even more as it noticed the totodile was its opponent. "Charmander, use ember!" Commanded Jake "Erm Jake, Ember is a fire type move, which isn't very effective against water type pokemon." Sighed Professor Spruce. "Totodile, use water gun!" Called Dustin. The powerful stream of water quenched the flames and smacked the Charmander dead in the face, with so much force that it was launched against the wall scattering posters. "Charmander! Get up, shake it off and use Scratch!" Prayed Jake. The fire pokemon was weak, but managed to get off the ground and launch itself at the totodile... Which sidestepped as the Charmander crashed into the table which had once held their pokeballs. The final pokeball bounced off the table and released Treeko, who jumped onto professor Spruce and angrily shook its fists at the two trainers for being Reckless.
"Sorry little guy, Guess we got carried away" Apologized Dustin. "Say, you boys both seem to be rather good trainers... why don't you take the Pokemon league challenge." Mused Professor Spruce. "I already planned it!" Boasted Jake, "I know all of the Olmas regions gyms by heart!" "Well then you should know that Solam city, home to the Solam city gym leader Nigel is the closest gym from Mavra town" said professor Spruce. "The Nigel? The guy from those commercials on TV?" Asked Dustin
"Indeed" said Professor Spruce. "Well then, I am going there first!" Claimed Jake as he ran out the lab. "Well, professor Spruce, thank you for the pokemon... Now I must make my exit and start my adventure" Remarked Dustin as he also ran out of the lab. The professor looked at the Treeko that had been sitting on his shoulder. He smiled and began to pick up the mess that had been created during the battle.
Chapter 2 (DUSTIN): Enter team skull!
Spoiler:
Dustin and Jake had gone there seperate ways and now Dustin walked down the forested paths of route 1 watching pokemon run around. He had been training Totodile on the wild pokemon of Route 1 when he heard a voice come from the woods on the edge of the path.
"Hey kid, what is a weakling like you doing with a pokemon? Is that old coot still giving away pokemon to weak trainers?" Sneered the mystery voice. "Who are you and I'll have you know I'm not weak." Replied Dustin bravely. "Oh? Is that so... Well then" Began the mystery voice as it stepped out from the shadows. It was a man wearing a dark purple suit with a large white Skull in the center. "The only way to prove that is a pokemon battle!" He yelled as he threw out a pokeball which contained a Stunky. "Totodile, lets show this punk who the weak one really is!" Remarked Dustin.
"Stunky, use scratch!" Ordered the mystery trainer. "Totodile, water gun!" Yelled Dustin. The skunk pokemon jumped forward with its claw at the ready, while Totodile waited for the perfect moment to blast a jet of water out of its mouth, knocking the Stunky away with ease. "Ha! You is that all you've got? You're all talk and no show!" Laughed Dustin. Then strangely the skunk pokemon began to glow with a bright white light. "Oh thats not fair." sighed Dustin as the Stunky evolved into Skuntank. "Alright! Skuntank, use Poison gas!" said the mystery trainer. "Totodile! Water gun quickly!" Begged Dustin. The Skuntank prepared itself to release posion gas, and was suddenly blasted by a stream of water fainting it.
"Alright kid, you win, but I am only a grunt in the bigger operations of team skull. Believe me, we will be back." Grunted the man as he healed his Skuntank. "Hold it right there!" Yelled a female voice. Dustin turned to notice Officer Jenny standing there. "You are under arrest for robbery, theft, and wearing that horrid looking outfit!" She said. "You will not catch me! Skuntank use smokescreen!" The man yelled. A thick black smoke soon covered the entire path of route 1. When it cleared, the man had vanished.
"Sorry I took so long, Its not exactly a top priority to check on rumors of suspicious characters, but turns out this one was true. Just too bad we couldn't apprehend the culprit. Oh! Your not hurt or anything are you?" Said Officer Jenny. "No, I think we are okay, right Totodile?" replied Totodile. "To...ta..." breathed Totodile. "Oh no! That must be skuntanks poison gas attack mixed with its aftermath ability. You better come with me, I can escort you to the Solam city pokemon center!"
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