Competitive Wi-Fi HG/SS Team any good?

[Pkmn-Br33der]

Team Leader

Umbreon
Nature: careful
Hp:363
Atk:229
Def:319
Sp. Atk:197
Sp. Def:394
Spd:229
Moveset
Mean look
Baton pass
Yawn
Torment
Item:lum berry
Ability:synchronize

Starmie
Nature:timid
Hp:293
Atk:224
Def:238
Sp. Atk:328
Sp. Def:269
Spd:298
Moveset:
Ice beam
Thunderbolt
Psychic
Recover
Item:Sitrus berry
Ability:natural cure

Electrivire
Nature:Adamant
Hp:323
Atk:379
Def:202
Sp. Atk:260
Sp. Def:269
Spd:289
moveset:
Ice punch
Cross chop
Thunder punch
Earthquake/fire punch
Item:leftovers
Ability:motor drive

Gliscor
Nature:impish
Hp:323
Atk:289
Def:383
Sp. Atk:170
Sp. Def:248
Spd:289
Moveset
Sword dance
Earthquake
Rock slide
Thunder fang
Fire fang
Item:life orb
Ability:sand veil

Arcanine
Nature:adamant
Hp:384
Atk:350
Def:259
Sp. Atk:269
Sp. Def:259
Spd:289
Moveset:
Extremespeed
Crunch
Fire fang
Iron tail
Item:king's rock

Gengar
Nature:modest
Hp:293
Atk:206
Def:219
Sp. Atk:394
Sp. Def:249
Spd:319
Moveset:
Confuse ray
Focus blast
Shadow ball
Sludge bomb
Item:shell bell/leftovers/ i dont know really
Ability:Levitate
Please criticism is welcome and also comments;D

 

[RubberKid]

Not a bad team at all! im trying to see anything that i can change but its a pretty good Team! im guessing they are all lvl100?

 

[Snorelacks]

First, it would help if you listed Pokemon like this to reduce clutter:

Pokemon @ Item
Ability
Nature
EVs
Move 1
Move 2
Move 3
Move 4

Set Comments

Now your team:

Gliscor needs Poison Heal. Poison Heal is what made Gliscor Gliscor in this generation.

I'd say more, but I'm tired. :D Lol sorry.

 

[Calamity]

Gliscor needs Poison Heal. Poison Heal is what made Gliscor Gliscor in this generation.

Think this team is for HG/SS, so Poison Heal isn't going to be available. Anyway I noticed you've also got 5 moves got him, that won't work lol. I reccomend this set for 4th gen;

Gliscor @ Leftovers
Impish/Jolly Nature
Sand Veil
~ Stealth Rock
~ Earthquake
~ Roost
~ Taunt/U-Turn
252 Hp | 4 Def | 252 Spe

With Stealth Rock and Taunt, Gliscor can even work effectively as a lead. Taunt allows him to beat slower Pokemon from setting up Stealth Rock, while Roost can keep him in good condition as the battle wears on. Gliscor can also be saved for later on, so you don't even need to set up Stealth Rock immediately. Earthquake is the attack of choice, since it lets Gliscor fast threat like Infernape etc. Hope this helps. :)

 

[Pkmn-Br33der]

Hey thank you every1, is that the only thing everyone sees, i wanted to put swampert in replacing starmie and gliscor and put swampert and porygon z? Any good?

 

[Pkmn-Br33der]

Please any suggestions for swampert and porygon z?

 

[Dark Azelf]

Uh all your Pokemon have maxed out EV's in every stat and you know, Starmie cannot have 328 sp.att with Timid. =/

 

[Anti]

Yeah, this is either sloppy stat copying or your Pokemon aren't legit. It's pretty much impossible to have a worthwhile thread given that, so...

*closed*