D-Quad's Poetry

[Dooquadalittle]

I love nonsense poetry. So I tried to write my own.

Girls and boys, ladies and gentlebugs,
Bankers and barbers with unshaved mugs,
Hoboes and tramps, Pikas in pants,
Gators and waiters and green-speckled ants,
Cavemen and mammoths, frogs and toads,
Insects and mammals, streets and roads,
I come before you to stand behind you,
And tell you something I know nothing about.

I have never done any poetry before. See what you think.

 

[Reina]

Its amusing, it reminds me of the random stuff Dr. Seuss writes. x3

 

[WriteThemWrong]

well...you achieved what you set out to do

 

[ShadowLeader]

i liked it....mind if i read it to my nephews? i think they will particularly enjoy it!

 

[BHwolfgang]

It's like dirty nursery rhyming. XD

Well, you achieved it. It doesn't really make sense, just rhyming.

 

[Dooquadalittle]

i liked it....mind if i read it to my nephews? i think they will particularly enjoy it!

Sure. I'm sure they will!

 

[ShinjisLover]

I. . Really didn't like it at all. Just a bunch of rhyming. =/ Kinda boring and it's something for, like, 3 year olds.​

 

[ShadowLeader]

I. . Really didn't like it at all. Just a bunch of rhyming. =/ Kinda boring and it's something for, like, 3 year olds.​

that was the point....its like...just really funny to me...you know....wait...im babbling...sorry..

Sure. I'm sure they will!

I did...and they LOVED it! they thought i was reading a Dr Sues book to them...which is really good.