Dark Void (PG-13)

[Soccerryle]

I'm always accepting Constructive Critasism, lol.

Prolouge

"I...

I... Am...

I... Am... Sa..."

The Earth begins to crack. Blood rises through the cracks, sweeping the streets. Horrid humans awe in fear. Stare deep into the sun; You see no trace of light. Instead, a Dark Void. The Void can sense fear, as it destroies all in it's path. The more you panic, the faster your death. It can't be stopped, it has to run it's course. What happens if you escape the void? You consider yourself the luckiest bastard alive. Satan doesn't kill his own kin...

Jason Inclu is the average teenager.. Satan prepares to go on a killing spree, looking for his son...

 

[Fail-Z]

SOunds quite interesting... One spelling mistake at " as it destroies..."

 

[pinkyandtheslain]

hahah i enjoyed that so suspensful

 

[arceusx]

Aww... why was it so short.