Dash in Pokémon Ruby

[The Dash]

Just so you know the first episode is a Pilot. The second will have proper frames in it and a proper logo.

Story:
You have just moved into the lush, full coloured reigon of Hoenn.
A big difference from your 16 color world of ole' (Johto).
Story is basicly the same as Pokémon Ruby but with more randomness.

Episode list:
Episode one: I feel a flashback


Credit:
Avatar - Dash's Overworld Sprites ( Flanker base set)
Draginis - Dash back sprite
Belive it or not all the maps and such I ripped myself so credit for them goes to me :P

 

[fallinroxas]

and you say mine was bad. 2/10

 

[Persona]

and you say mine was bad. 2/10

=/ That was spam. If you don't like the comic, then say whyyou dislike it.

Now, as for the comic, I say that the first episode was okay. Although, it doesn't look like it'll be that great if its almost exactly like ruby. Too early to rate.

 

[fallinroxas]

i dont like the sprite ther you happy

 

[The Dash]

And what exactly is wrong with the sprite? Be more specific and take your time over reviews. Dont just flame me because i told you that your comic is bad.

 

[fallinroxas]

i'm not the text is bad put it in speak bubble and mixing g/s/c sprites with r/s/e sprites is bad

 

[Signomi]

fallinroxas, before posting a comment, actually plan out what you have to say. If you're not going to make a decent comment firstly without being provoked into making one, then don't even make one at all.

Also, don't go about rating a comic a certain level because the same person happened to have rated your comic the same. It's both not fair and doesn't provide proper accuracy on your views. Show no biasty.

 

[Kurosaki Ichigo]

I personally think fallin should be reported for being so spammy anyway, back to topic, it looks good so far Dash, i think you should include the Meowth Balloon, that'd look very awesome.

 

[The Dash]

Lol the plan was that I follow the plot of Ruby but make a bit of fun of it, but I suppose putting Team Rocket in wouldent hurt :P We will just see. I'm going to make the next eppy after school tomorrow and 1 maby 2 eps at the weekend. Depends on how motivated I am lol. Thanks for clearing him up for me Siggi aswell. Some people cant take criticism, eh?

 

[Kurosaki Ichigo]

Yeah, thats defiently true Dash, anyway i hope to see some promising stuff from you Dash ^_^

 

[nashie1]

Despite the plots similarity to the actual game, I loved the sprite and the flashback. Maybe devamping him would make it look slightly better. That's just my opinion though so you choose. Looks great so far 8/10.

 

[~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~]

Thats kind of freaky you were in one demention and then your in another one.

:t093:~*!*~Queen Boo~*!*~